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on first words by decadentlaurel
27 Dec 2002, 5:51 PM
shouldn't this be final thouhts?
this is all second act. no first or third? it needs more arc. set up your anger more, so that we know why you are mad, exactly, and more of the process you took to expose that anger and fear in order to cure it..beyond just the basketball..that's only a third of the solution. where is the other two thirds? good first draft though. here's a seven.
very romantic and surreal. captivating visuals. a wonderful poem.e
seems too short...you're reading and then its like "wait...where did the rest of the poem go?"...5
'for at night these words seem so much coarser'...totally true...9
lovely poem...8
the eye of sarnath sees all.
9
haha i love this. i sliced a chunk off my thumb with a cheese grater once. evil things, those metal contraptions...9
lovely words...10
indeed.
that's awesome. we watched monty python here too, then the montery rock festival on dvd. jimi's performance was 'out of control'. great minds think alike. Glad you guys are out of that drought now. cheers.
It's pretty!
Yes, but, does a computer know the differece between
a banana split and chopped liver? I think not but Alex
does. He also generalizes concepts and, unlike a computer,
he is affectionate tho at times he gets cranky, usually
when he orders his steak rare and it comes back medium.
Regarding those nudists, the sentient/nakedness theory
is exposed as quackery every time one of the males has
a hard on. I'd say that would prove they are sentient
though the viagra factor cannot be ignored in the equation.
The bottom line is we must wait for the unification of
the strong and weak nuclear force, electromagnetism and
gravity before we know if Alex is sentient. He recently
wrote a paper on this which Hawkings described as very
un-parrot like though he made several mathematical
errors. Alex is presently hard at work correcting his
mistakes and the sentient/nakedness conundrum may be
resolved in the near future. Just in case, he has ordered
several outfits from Lands' End. He also tod me you are
ruffling his feathers as he is still waiting for the
sunflower seeds.
Nope, I am no big fan of PETA. They are a bit too
extreme and in a sense, hurt rather than help their
cause. My feelings on animal cruelty are pretty
much mainstream and obvious to many who also view
PETA as being too radical. Thanks for the visit.
All those things can be done by a computer. Does that mean computers are sentient? I thought you were going to attempt to refute the claim that something is sentient if and only if it intentionally conceals its nudity by saying that people living in nudist colonies would, if the nudity theory was true, not be sentient.
Indeed they are not sentient.
Not as funny as your face, ANIMAL MURDERER!
Are you the PETA spokesperson? It's funny how many people object to animal cruelty yet these people all wear leather shoes, jackets...carry leather wallets.
is this a short story or a poem??? anyway, here's a 5 for shaving your head and meditating for 5 hours.... Are you a big Richard Gere and Ricky Martin fan?