horus8
replying on The Coming Light by poetandknowit
24 Dec 2002, 12:36 AM
"Despite the negative comments, I actually quite like the poem. It looks like a poem that my college professor's assistant would write....have a 9 " this is precisely what is wrong with american poetry. the never ending loop. i've read this poem so maby fucking times translated from every god forsaken culture that's ever 'been', or is now..it's old and comfortable i guess for you fine tuned 'college types'. more safe poetry about mundane changes. congradulations to you and your professors..to bad you're all hopelessly doomed to stagnate in your own complaisant ass sniffing dog licks. wow. spring ahead jump back..it's winter time..i better hit the sack [you should blow your noses. your slimy upper lips are fucking making me physically sick]. (thanks for the betty ford coupon, by the way, after reading this i'll need it. see you there)
they're t.s smelliot blow hards. i'd be careful they might take away your blue peter badge, and report you to the WMFOTW (wintermusefightersoftheworld).
good enough to take money from and fuck?
heh
good job horus
now, about the plaguristic crap
I was wondering what these people were made of.
that is fun.
Umm... I definitely like this. For the nobility of the sentiments expressed here, take a 9
I agree with the others, do something about the ending.The style is good
I had to read it twice, but it was worth it ,i suppose
i didn't start the fire...
I liked the second and third stanzas..........
i know about the waiting for that light. if p&k is mr winter for the mountains, then i am mrs for clinging desperately to the shortening nights, until the land is greened. this is a poem about hope and despair, in the simplest of metaphors: light and dark.
"I'm speechless. I'm sorry, and I have no wish whatsoever to spark a
race war, but as a Brit this typifies what I hate about Yanks. Where is
your style? This is an absolute horror of a piece. 0, and for the first
time ever if I could give minus points I would. The worst piece of shit
I've ever read on this site. I can't believe a poem has been posted
going through the moon for inspiration. Not only that, but your
verses are completely and utterly uninspiring. The final line beggars
belief, and your use of the moon throughout and the various references to
the moon suggest that you are a child pretending to be an adult.
Awful. "l
Despite the negative comments, I actually quite like the poem. It looks like a poem that my college professor's assistant would write....have a 9
Why is it a shame that I enjoyed a poem?? Seriously, it's very good. Very forceful - you can't help but feel that every word really means something.e
he said 'bone'
a lot.
ON A SECOND READING, I REALIZE I AM WRONG.A
YOU FORGOT TO MENTION THE WOEFULLY INADEQUATE INCLUSION OF A COCKSUCKING THEMEr
now that's a damn shame. i only put some thought into the title. isn't it.
Time is not an illusion to me and ultimately I disagree with the statement as a pure goofism. It is something to be reckoned with and understood, just like we have throughout the ages. It is also a continuing metaphor throughout my work. So really, I don't give a fuck if you have trouble with it. Go read hour8's new poem. Maybe you will have an easier time with that one. Merry Christmas.
I'm not dependent on anything. No I suppose it's not brain surgery, but I personally have trouble with the image because for me time already is just an illusion, a trick.
Please, do not get used to it.
I'm impressed. Diplomas all around. Of course, I am sure it is not brain surgery.