kaykat
replying on Paying for Sin by kaykat
24 Dec 2002, 2:19 PM
Sorry, just wondering what they did to you.
"you really must word your comments more crearly.." ha ha ha. yes .yes. the cads will now perform their latest hit "I Crearly love you, also known as "i queerly love you too" in e minor. for the asians of course. [by the way this poem rocks, NOT super queef!
What is your question...? you asked "do you not like asians" as if you do not, like, know what I mean, or you like to not know what you've seen or like you think Asia is a bad place for futuristic bad people or I am, like, bad for using the word Asia...or you want your money back for the Asia CD you bought thinking it waz something better than an underated 80's band...you really must word your comments more crearly...
what exactly is he insecure about again? Where his girl works? or his 'problems' all of them fantasies you've been programmed into believing. horus8, is no more or less insecure than any other user at poemranker. including and most of all you, our faithfull leader. Such poison tipped rebuttles? i feel almost moved to cry at this moment in time by your harsh tone sir! Don't mistake a return for a serve and call it 40 love home skillet, it's unbecoming and it makes your lip tremble and eye twitch. revolting really, you picking on that nice truck driver like that. tsk.tsk. you are an elitist shit-stain somewhere between the left shoulder of 'id' and the right nostril of 'ego'. but with the heart of a cock-a-roach. disgusting really, your attitude leaves little to be remembered.
yeah cool huh!!!
at least your ashes are going to heaven
wow, what can I say, uh nice
Must you vote on the work of a plagiarist?
Oh my god, Becky, look at this truck driving idiot get on his knees and suck dick. Stop it now, be serious. I have a broken finger and it hurts to laugh. He is not insane; he is an insecure freak. If you were more observant, you would notice these things. But then again, you must be in the same uneducated boat sinking on Lake Superior.
I like it, sometimes I feel like that too.
I almost thought you didn't write this... one sip short of a free keg.
...You'll be fine
Does this rhyme?
i went to your homepage. i think i love you too.
Frustrated. Good. Dangerous. Last line needs a (?).
Too bad despair wins. Not my cup of tea,you might have guessed
Again, at my own peril, I liked it.
I think people are jealous of you because you are comfortable in your insanity. Self comfort is something to be admired. if it exists.
Not one God, but the planet seen as a vast living system in its own right, praying to God.
In the early 1960's, Dr James Lovelock, independent scientist, environmentalist, author and researcher, invited by NASA to participate in the scientific research for evidence of life on Mars formulated a theory as to why the Earth appeared to be not so much a planet adorned with diverse life forms, but a planet which had been transfigured and transformed by a self-evolving and self-regulating living system. The theory was named "The Gaia Theory??? after the Greek goddess who drew the living world forth from Chaos. Its central notion, that the planet behaves as a living organism, raises the question, "To what extent is our collective intelligence also a part of Gaia? Do we as a species constitute a Gaian nervous system and a brain which can consciously anticipate environmental changes?"
???soul of Earth??? = ???Gaia???
Until the very soul of Earth,
Tormented by savage wars,
Of brutal intensity,
Cried out for deliverance.
Universal laws of time and space,
Held in suspension,
By the "Word of the Most High",
As answer to Gaia's prayer,
Thank you for your interest and comments. This piece is still in its infancy and has a long way to go. Any additional thoughts you may have are certainly welcome and would be very much appreciated.
Considering the poets you read and your ignorance about the state of American poetry and the enormous chip you carry around I would really not be so proud to state an opinion. Becase they are a joke. You revealed your cards. Stan Rice. hahahaha. You have all his books. hahahaha Is there a problem with having an education and not relying on a fast food company for a fucking paycheck, brig boy? Man, I hope you succeed in soap operas, because you are going nowhere else with the talent you have and the big bad GED. Except maybe Kmart, when the looks fade and the agent stops calling. Yes, 8 bucks and hours for you. But it will be worth it. Because when you die, you will finally be recognized for genius. hahahahahahah.