<{Baba^Yaga}>
replying on Little Johnie's Jihad by <{Baba^Yaga}>
24 Dec 2002, 4:32 PM
who's fooling http://www.gangbox.com/mp3/little%20john
there's an old tennessee saying...well, maybe texas, but definitely tennessee. it says, fool me once, shame on...shame on me. fool me again...well...well it says you can't fool me again.
<{Baba^Yaga}>
replying on Faucet's got a nasty drip. FUCK! Not again! by <{Baba^Yaga}>
24 Dec 2002, 3:56 PM
frightfully massive, to the point were you have to choose a side and rub savagely.>
the line is "god, i wish i had another joint" and ironically i do? ah chewy whicky whicky chew. ha ha ha! those that don't smoke the kind iriee nugs are doomed to have their christmas tree's bleached. wew wew. chick shoe.o
dude, that's fucking rad. have a REAL BACHIAN SWAGGER AWARD! FOR LAYING PIPE WITH HYPE WHILE HUNTING SNIPE chewy wewwy wicky boo. 10.
why don't you dedicate a song to her, how about homegrown? you want me to cut and paste it at her chicky chew?
Ok - ironically enough you've forced me to take you seriously - you said "drive around" so at least your old enough for that. Your poems, however, are missing a certain rat-tit-tat-tat. Let the smoke fill your brain, let go of mom and dad's processes with the rest of your distain... It'll all be better when you go to college:)
Bachus -
My last three comments were presented to you, but now I find myself misunderstood, I think I have a new girlfriend (she better be cute), but It's 2:47 and Im lost in poemranker and am feeling mute.
Good for you KK. I don't do well with critical humor. You're off to a better start than I am.
I like the original better. Thanks for the P\F KK.
This is quite good. By far not your best, to toss your words back at you with good humor, but still clean and beautiful in its way. Your strength, I think, lies in your ability to strip images down; to discard the clutter. It probably helps that, having to live with, in, winter, I relate to this on a visceral level (although I don't necessarily see winter as something to be endured--countless shades of gray have their own beauty, especially in stony, stark, wintry New England).
The "state of American poetry"? Hmmm. What would that be, other than utter decline? Can the Internet and its accompanying "pimple poetry," as you like to call it, save the art form? Maybe! Have you read Dana Gioia's "Can Poetry Matter?" resurrected since his ascension? Interesting, if nothing new and perhaps more depressing than not. No doubt you have, but to be found here: http://www.theatlantic.com/unbound/poetr
I like!! It's good!
Ha, your a funny kid! Ya know what's weird I accualy like your critical humor.
If honesty equals dick sucking, then I'm guilty. Any thing else is just political verbal trash. Now all I need is a Cocaine account and an 8yr college diploma and I can be as perfect as any other C.E.O.
honey, you are special pretty, and you have a very soecial purpose in life. probably vet school, but just not poetry. Bad poetry does not equal bad looking just the opposite actually, and i can almost already imagine just how beautifull you are.
umm ok... and why exactly are you telling me this?
What have they done to you that makes you project that feeling coming from me. I said Id meet you there. Do you not like asia? Do you not want to go? It's a nice place. Or just as nice as our US. Pearl Harbor happened 60 years ago, get over it.Oh, I forgot, you like the japanese, but not the asians. Stop being so critical of those asians whom you've never met...It's rreally un PC
Wow I really don't know what to say to you Bachus, first you stand up for me then you put me down. I'm so hurt! HA!
you could say derrrhhaaassssttreesddghgfdrre!, and then throw yourself in traffic.