Listen, I don't know you, but he can kick some ass, take my word for it. He's crazy. I don't know who Stan Rice is so I don't get the reference. You present yourself as morbidly narrow minded. I'm not "stuck" anywhere though the playground might not be so bad. I'm not arguing with you. Why would I ever want to hold you? You killed that remember? Why would I ever want to be where you and Jeremi are fighting each other?

i think you'll find that should have been Moi, pretentious? No not you. God'swife seemed to suggest earlier that ==Doylum was pretentious. The questions were for her. But while we are on the subject of answereing earlier questions, and since shes ignoring me, what happened to handshandy?

what about the pretentious? you still haven't answered my questions

What on earth are you talking about? I said we are all poseurs. You are hard to swallow PAKI, but you like it that way. The world has always been ending; Carbon made always wants to be unmade. He'll kick your ass, I wouldn't if I we're you. I don't want to watch, and you don't want me to hold you. You've forgotten how to learn. Your whispers carry a heavy debt, like mustard gas.

You take GW and I'll take H8. Fight to the death. Then we will watch reruns of Passions starring Baba Yaga.

wah?

You must have my back Dolie.

I am not sure; his words. I am also an oil slave who has no right to teach anything having to do with Latin America. Let's see, I am also a poser in both of your eyes and lack all forms of integrity and I make you and he sick to digest. And the world is ending and also my poetry is almost over. He is quite the talent with threats. Let's hope the fists retain the power lacking with his words. It should be an event. Please, come and watch. Hold me in between rounds. Teach me new tangos while I whisper the secrets of the last frontier against your Argentine skin.

i though you were male. Oh wounds plural not wound

I haven't heard til now. Do you eat lots of oatmeal?

Again Intransit, the second stanza has so much heart, and the word 'little' carries the scent of indearnment; study just seems to stern an introduction. You're the only one who knows the truth. I don't like Boston Market as a rule, but they make a hell of a creamed spinach, with anice Chardonnay it's quite the meal.

Good god, yes. Get that boy some worthy reading.

I'm not saying the question is necessarily the best idea, but I liked it more than what he changed it to. The current stanza feels stoic and purely academic, like I'm in class and the teacher's asking me to pay attention. It doesn't work for me with respect to the idea behind the poem. I think there is a better alternative, What do you think?

Disagree. The question was pointless and distracted the reader. Get to the point with confidence. Don't question the reader when you have something to say. But GW is a visionary. So I would listen to her. 10-4?

yes, and thank you. I will try harder to relax in your presence. do you think gws' right that it needs a little more? <60 Ill try ya later 10q

Much netter. See how easy that was.