Fetylum
replying on Music That Cannot Exist by Fetylum
17 Dec 2002, 1:42 AM
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm...
Nope. But, I wonder how it would be for someone on acid to read it? X.x
Challenging spheres? Is that a Holly wood thing? Come on fuck face. You don't even know me. At least I do not steal T.S. Elliot's most famous poem and claim it as my own. hahahahahah. What a dick you are. But is is all visionary, right dick head?
The blue butterflies are a simble of when the Musc That Cannot Exist, begins.
Like the poem though.
Hey, you should hear my group (the Psychedelic Butterflies) sometime. Oh, hang on, that means we actually have to record something.
Sweet dear: a plagiarist is a plagiarist. And the fact that you know her and in some way justify her actions is scary. It is the ultimate form of scum to steal another's work. But maybe you call it visionary. Is Athena the 22-year-old bitch that bore your child and works the turkey roil to pay the preschool? Hahahahahahah, Stan Rice. You idiot of all idiots. christtof (and I will let the poor chap defend himself, although I suspect him too modest) could write circles around you and your minions. hahahahahahaha. Stan Rice.
Wow, you've got a thing about these blue butterflies, haven't you?
Athena is a girl i know that use to stay in my guest house. as for her poetry, that's her problem..well i can tell you this thief or not she moves in more challenging spheres than you, but i fear you have her plowed in the poetry area, but that's not saying alot. is it. Christof bet poet here? i would argue that there are better, see that's the problem with being #1..all sunday drives come to an end..enjoy your time here..glad you enjoyed the opera..here's a moist towelette you missed a little chunk on your cheek there..all clean.scoot along now.LMAO.r
poetandknowit
replying on I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8
17 Dec 2002, 1:25 AM
hahahhahahahahahahahahahahah. More California speak. One idiot breeds another. Is there any good poetry on this site tonight. Is their anyone with a high school diploma on this site tonight? I am a movie star. My hands crave the cement. I have a 41 year old god mother of my kid who I am teaching the fine art of dumbing down. Oh please, please, my ass is a virgin.
Holy shit this is strange. I need to read it a couple more times before I decide whether I like it or not. Good words, though. I'll give it an 8 for now, just because of the fifth line-'moon-haunted woods'-brilliant!
And there was me thinking this was all about acid.
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And I thought I was bad... Good use of really bad creativity, I give it..a TEN! Just because you made me laugh...
Well yes, but no..brother, i know i have given up part of our most secret of ceremonies 'the naked gay whipping of wretched fraudulent poets with dental floss fermented kidney stones', but he just wouldn't stop whining, and he has to pee every five minutes..shame really..ah the soap part was just my negativity perculating i wont know till the first of the year..wow, do i need a cigarette i've had my cock in this psuedo intellectual all day, and boy what a barker, and if you turn him into the light just so he coos...no shit..here try him out. got a smoke? thanks...like the opera? funny aye? here i'll sign your program..you can borrow my binaculars.t
Wow, thanks! I was considering giving this poem a subtitle-"The Importance of Sleep", but I was too tired.
Oh, and how is it possible for my tonsils to grow back unevenly? It sounds mighty amusing!
Here is my attempt to track down your crappy poems and make a comment, which I have avoided at all costs in the past. Well, you have Intransit, who would give a pile of shit a 10 loving this and Athena, the plagiarist (or is it you) digging it, and Christof (the best poet on this site) well he was dazed and thinking of New Zealand, because it is shit. Just like all the other poem you write.
poetandknowit
replying on setting the record straight on April by poetandknowit
17 Dec 2002, 12:55 AM
No matter what you conjure or what Stan Rice poem you put up against mine, I will better it. Even something I write in less than three minutes, like this. Free wanderings. Come on. Are you serious? He enjoys watching bread mold. hahahahahaha, You fuck.
poetandknowit
replying on Prose poem written in 1 minute and 27 seconds while listening to Slim Cessna croon by poetandknowit
17 Dec 2002, 12:52 AM
You wish. And did you write it in 1:27? I think not. Reevaluate, punk ass.
you've got to be shittin' me
Bachus
replying on HGH 1000 (human growth hormone) fountain of youth? by Bachus
17 Dec 2002, 12:47 AM
much creepier than ours..do you think perhaps you could stop rhyming for a second you're scaring me.u
The website threw me for a loop, I'm a little lost at the nature of the scoop. I found an http: that is currently poop. I have missed the metaphor forcing a frown, please dont tell me your passions are crowned
AESTHETIC THEORY
"Contrive a poem out of ears.
Tell it
so that its petals unchocolate
like a brain in a jar
Wax walnut, melting with thought.
Make it a poem almost
lewdly knowledgable
and make its knowledge
ooze, syrup from the punched trunk.
Make it snake up to the molecule whorey and put its mouth
atomic against the mouth of its core.
Pull on its stem
to expose its foetus. Make it
have children with sleek ginger jaws,
make the dogs moan when it passes,
let it out of its jar
make it lie with our corpse, our chaos.
Make it hungry, evil, enemy of Death.
Put it on paper. Read it.
Make surgery its sigh, and of such sting
the scorpions call it Jehovah & Who.
Make it now before you crapout.
Contrive it, sperm it, stroke it,
make it efficient, make it fit,
make it more poem than Poem can survive."
Stan Rice, Some Lamb 1975..