poetandknowit
replying on Icarus up by horus8
17 Dec 2002, 12:40 AM
And wow, usd1565. Have you ever considered doing something sensible and buying? Why throw the money away? Is living in Hollywood with that important? Is working fast food that necessary. My house payment while a bit more (if we are throwing these things around) at least I am getting something. And I do not have to live in a place that is as vile as where you live. Come on.
SP REYNOLDS
on Prose poem written in 1 minute and 27 seconds while listening to Slim Cessna croon by poetandknowit
17 Dec 2002, 12:35 AM
I appriciate you seeing the light, however Jesus came before
Hollywood, but if you would like to know my # or jeremy the greek's I suggest you come down to tinsle town and stand in line with the other star fucking freeks
I melt too!
Whatever. Shit is shit. Are you just showing how bad Stan Rice is. hahahahahaah Yes, I am well aware that I write better than he does. Is this actually his stuff. Come on fuck head tough guy. Write something worth a shit.
poetandknowit
replying on I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8
17 Dec 2002, 12:24 AM
But I forget, the high school drop out that fancies himself a father is actually the reincarnation of Nostradamus. He knows all. We must listen.
LAMENT
"Cry not, my baby.
Cry.
I know a frog ate a white moth.
The frog did not cry.
That's why he's a frog.
The moth did not cry.
My baby, cry not. Cry.
There is much to do.
I will cry too.
I will cry for you.
Stan Rice, Some Lamb 1975..
poetandknowit
replying on I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8
17 Dec 2002, 12:16 AM
Oh, so clever. No, I say, 100 years.
Whoever gave this a 10 was in need of either a GED or just completely drunk. Have not we established that this fictional character cannot write.!!!!! It is not worthy of more than a zero. I would give it less, but I am limited see, by nentwhistle. We need minus #s.
33 years 4 months.
More shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But genius!!!!!!!!!!!!
But it is all of us that are missing the point. In 100 years this will be the pinnacle of art. haahahahhahaha
A work of visionary genius. You need to submit this at once, just to show us you are the POLLACK OF Poetry. HAHAHAHAHA. Stan Rice. Really. you suck as a writer. hahahahahahaha
This was the worst rejoinder ever....
And my wife and her fat ass, hahahahahah, She is a competitive runner - in the vain of GW - hahhahahah.....fat ass. ahahaajhahahah. Do you have even a GED you ignorant dickhead. hahahahahaha. Do you, you high school dropout, I have been in the brig, and popped out a baby with an 18 year old high school girl because that is the level and only the level (something big is coming) I think at. hahahhahah. Come on you fool. Bring it on. I am still young yet. What do you have that could defeat me, besides a stolen turkey. You dip fool. hahhahahahah., Stan Rice.....How profound.......
hahahahah, You just proved everything I said. And I am drunk even. What a dork. You are truly the idiot of this site. As I said, Before the Boston Chicken, get the GED. Stan Rice. hahahahah. Next you will justify Ann Rice and her son. Vampire visionaries. hahhahahahaha, What a fool. You did not answer me you punk ass amateur attempter of writing poetry. Are you threatening me? hahahahahahhahah
poetandknowit
on Milk & Honey with a touch of PCP <the dead cat edit> by horus8
16 Dec 2002, 11:28 PM
This is a true and visionary piece of work. You must submit this to the Paris Review at once. Just where Stan Rice has published. hahahahahahhahhaahhaha
"I put my head on the mist of your breast," wow. this was even better than that jude law movie. i need a cigarette and "The name of which village unsettled my heart" that's a hoot.sid and marty croft made a fortune doing this. you wont.C
FUCK! THERE GOES ANOTHER ONE! have you seen my dog..he's like so high, and about yay long?
"I decided to build a raging fire
But little did I know, I would get hired By a boy scout in need He doesnt sell cookies, indeed and its such a YMCA-like shame" you are an artist indeed. in tweed.