Tintagiles
on Confusion by ThoughtfulSoul
7 Nov 2002, 8:00 PM
It was horrible. And then the pink hippo appeared. Was it as scary as the real thing is?
Your friends run amok too. You and your insane social circle. Let us hope the zombies hold their liquor as well as your friends. I somehow suspect they're all going to visit the liquor store. Remind them that the Scotch is mine, please.
Yes.. the sly corbies are a bit close... though of course one would take those sly corbies over this anyday.
EEEEWWWW! You're so sick! You're a horrible horrible person and I hope you get kicked off this site and I'm going to set the police on you! These aren't funny at all, these people are all perverts, how can you write about perverts, you must be really wierd. Mommy told me to stay away from people like you. They're all ick!
On a slightly more serious note, the second isn't up to the framing ones.
It is a very well written poem and also sweet. At parts you flowed very nicely then you broke up. But it was very good.
you can be blunt, i'm not hiding anything or foisting just being creative is all. why? what's wrong with it? do you know something i don't? the other day i went to charity event in san diego. sheer terror. "the latta". the fold. bermuda.
you're funny. have fun.
lose the last bound, and it's practically normal. almost 6.??
I love horror movies. i have yet to see the ring, though. time for class. Death & Dying (religious studies 2137). it's cold and dark.
what did you think of that movie the ring? i mean it's not quite dario argento or dawn of the dead or anything, but in its own way. i thought it was unique and disturbing..that movie fucked my head up a bit..i had migrains and nightmares, and i'm a horror movie nut..it really effected my subconscious in odd ways to say the least...creepy. indeed. 8.h
I agree with Baba Yaga. The rest reminds me of the song "the curse of Millhaven" and the novel And the Ass Saw the Angel.
i was having a blast up until the last two stanzas..only because the joy of killing needs no explanation just more volunteers.t
Finally, something about suicide that isn't unspeakably bad.
Fantastic. I did a funky little tango to it. things can make me laugh or curse, but damn few poems make me dance.
thankee. I was considering one about yurming, but ran out of rhymes.
darling...i see a wonderfull future for you in my bengied chickens entrails...lovely! 9.
you are either foisting or hiding. which will it be?
Thanks. I just wanted to know how you reasoned it.
hmm...dont really know what your talking about...if its the "..." then eye just never write titles...poetry is about expression of feelings and just write them down...eye have more than books of em...eye wrote my first poem when eye was five...and if you are talking about the "eye"...eye is possessive and eye am not a possessive person...so eye feel that eye better explains who eye be...for my eye see all eye do as a me...all the you's eye encounter...all the beauty eye see...all the feelings eye feel, trapped in emotion and peac3...then maybe eye am just crazy...hmmm...