cleverdevice
on Body Language by Ninoy_Instigator
22 Oct 2002, 5:38 AM
Good.
Shrewsbury is an hole bubbeling cess in comparison to telford. Please do visit the wonderesness that is telfod
Ok Blade, its quite good really. (your still a cad though,)
no, no it isn't
Nice and uncomplicated.
Good, except a whole poem about a gunshot? If it were dedicated to someone who had been shot for a good cause it would be very good. However with no personal background it is a bit boring. It would be better if we knew the person who had been shot.
Well, Its a funny reflection on teen life. A little blunt and insensitive, but I guess thats us teenagers! Good
Quite average actually. No depth of character or history. Could be anything which in some cases is good, but here it's just vague.
Oh, come on. Forgiveness ring a bell? Get over yourself! People take themselves far too seriously these days.
if it truely is a song it sounds the most excellent of ditties
Wow. Very haunting actually. Really makes you think amout your mortality.
Hmmmmmm. A reasonable effort. It requires reading three times though.
Very dark. Very effective, Well done.
Very good. Stockport is the arsehole of the world isn't it?
I've come back to this. Will he dare? He would have to, wouldn't he? Or what kind of a man is he?
Isn't that a song? I've been to Shrewsbury but I've never been to me.
Excellent detail about the fashions of the 90s, and a great mordant ending. This is one of your toppermost.
This is oficially the wirst poem, yet i shall vote it as I would a piece of art, as it is.
I was really liking your work till then. You sir, are a cad!
I was really liking your work till then. You sir, are a cad!