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Nicholas Jones on Breathless. by Service 4 Oct 2002, 7:00 AM

Smell the cliches a mile off. It's nice, but doesn't do it for me. Sexual innuendo gets a bit dull.

Nicholas Jones on #17 by mikejedw 4 Oct 2002, 6:41 AM

I can see a flickering cloud bank out of my window, also in autumn sunshine. This poem speaks to me. Normally, I don't like the haiku form, but this is very visual and evocative.

Nicholas Jones replying on Recent History by Nicholas Jones 4 Oct 2002, 6:39 AM

Its just a whim. It would amuse me to have officially written the worst poem. The joke would be that yesterday I read something which was just the single word 'fuck'. At least, I, you know, thought about it.

Nicholas Jones replying on Suburbia in December by Nicholas Jones 4 Oct 2002, 6:36 AM

This is now the original version of the poem, in the form of the sonnet, which I think now was much better.

Christof on Sonnet For a Porn Star by mikejedw 4 Oct 2002, 5:23 AM

I think the third quatrain lets this poem down a bit; it seems to reduce rather than express her pain. But the couplet is a killer. Well done.

Christof on Endymion Dead by vulcan 4 Oct 2002, 5:21 AM

Keats this time? A good and concise response.

Dariana on A Sign on a Giant Donut at a Twenty Four Hour a Day Donut Shop Overlooking Pacific Coast Highway in Sunset Beach California at Eight in the Evening on September Twenty Fourth Two-Thousand and Two by Dark Angle 4 Oct 2002, 5:20 AM

????

Dariana on I Wish by liljsmith87 4 Oct 2002, 5:15 AM

Wishes we all have. Nice!

Dariana on Wednesday's Breaking by poetandknowit 4 Oct 2002, 5:13 AM

Eerie, or possibly the word is "different"? Still thinking on this one which is a good thing.

Dariana on Sonnet For a Porn Star by mikejedw 4 Oct 2002, 5:08 AM

Very realistic but I am not sure I would call it poetry.

Dariana on #17 by mikejedw 4 Oct 2002, 5:05 AM

A great start but it seems like there should be more. I like it.

little_angel_maria on Charlottesville by New Life Drug 4 Oct 2002, 2:32 AM

i realy like this poem its really good

little_angel_maria on Blade by Blade 4 Oct 2002, 2:28 AM

ok, scary but good

little_angel_maria on The TRust That Was Unreal (by WOOTNESS) by xanatos 4 Oct 2002, 2:23 AM

i loe this poem its wicked girl

little_angel_maria on Endymion Dead by vulcan 4 Oct 2002, 2:21 AM

wicked!!!

heroditus on Tugboats by poetandknowit 4 Oct 2002, 12:50 AM

Great-evocative stuff

vulcan on Breathless. by Service 4 Oct 2002, 12:42 AM

Well I liked it!except for the last stanza!(I expected you to say "I lost my life in a peaceful dream"!but still the first line of the last stanza is good enough"but now it brings peace, I prefer to be"how do you like it?sorry just a suggestion!7/9

Service on The Mill by vulcan 3 Oct 2002, 9:57 PM

The vulcan... an alien who supresses his/her emotions to allow logic to prevail unhindered. excellent poem.

Service on Shadows by darren67 3 Oct 2002, 9:54 PM

I can relate completely to your theme. Read my poem "human self pity" see if you like it. At least you are aware of the "unreal" things in your life.

Service on IMMIGRATION by ali 3 Oct 2002, 9:51 PM

nice pace