on Fighting before bed by zodiac
20 May 2004, 11:02 AM
the last 6 lines are good.
you need to maybe not use huge words together..
"crass nomenclature,
warm in our eiderdown plicature."
it really, really cuts up the flow. so there!
you need to maybe not use huge words together..
"crass nomenclature,
warm in our eiderdown plicature."
it really, really cuts up the flow. so there!
on Unwed by gilded in gold
23 Jan 2005, 12:20 PM
to Goad, who considers incomplete thoughts unworthy of interpretation and "mental diarhea" or "meaningless dribble", i say, you're entitled to your preferences, and you're real boring.
on Unwed by gilded in gold
23 Jan 2005, 5:59 PM
LOL.
on Unwed by gilded in gold
23 Jan 2005, 6:44 PM
No Goad, i meant LOL in a good way.
sorry....