on Unwed by gilded in gold
23 Jan 2005, 6:44 PM
No Goad, i meant LOL in a good way.
on Unwed by gilded in gold
23 Jan 2005, 5:59 PM
LOL.
on Unwed by gilded in gold
23 Jan 2005, 12:20 PM
to Goad, who considers incomplete thoughts unworthy of interpretation and "mental diarhea" or "meaningless dribble", i say, you're entitled to your preferences, and you're real boring.
on Fighting before bed by zodiac
20 May 2004, 11:02 AM
the last 6 lines are good.
you need to maybe not use huge words together..
"crass nomenclature,
warm in our eiderdown plicature."
it really, really cuts up the flow. so there!
you need to maybe not use huge words together..
"crass nomenclature,
warm in our eiderdown plicature."
it really, really cuts up the flow. so there!
replying on Unwed by gilded in gold
20 May 2004, 8:54 AM
wow! this is almost funny. i am sorry i don't understand all the words you throw around, but i am not sorry i don't understand where you are coming from. you don't know what else i have written, and who else has interpreted my works, and what poetry i have read. not that i care to tell you.
i am really sorry that you don't like to mentally work while you read poetry, or my poem. i am sorry you like to be spoon-fed. and that you have such strict rules about what it should be, and are not free to have more than one idea about it. i would hate to go to a museum or a gallery with you!
and thanks.. for the constructive criticism. i hope if you actually are a self-deemed expert in the realm of poetry-writing / interpretation (because there ALWAYS is interpretation, varied by reader, uncontrollable) that you come across alittle better to others ... in order to help them... anyway.
i am really sorry that you don't like to mentally work while you read poetry, or my poem. i am sorry you like to be spoon-fed. and that you have such strict rules about what it should be, and are not free to have more than one idea about it. i would hate to go to a museum or a gallery with you!
and thanks.. for the constructive criticism. i hope if you actually are a self-deemed expert in the realm of poetry-writing / interpretation (because there ALWAYS is interpretation, varied by reader, uncontrollable) that you come across alittle better to others ... in order to help them... anyway.
on Back to Sorrow by justjay
20 May 2004, 5:59 AM
i'd say all i grab ARE the links again...
sorry....
sorry....
replying on Unwed by gilded in gold
20 May 2004, 5:57 AM
well .. gilded can be taken many ways... i could say, the cracks in the sidewalk are gilded in snow... and it would be something totally different. even tho gilded usually refers to gold. but, ahhh well.
replying on Unwed by gilded in gold
20 May 2004, 5:56 AM
ha
it's not supposed to make a ton of sense. i leave a lot up to interpretation. i like unpainted.
it's not supposed to make a ton of sense. i leave a lot up to interpretation. i like unpainted.
replying on Unwed by gilded in gold
19 May 2004, 8:39 PM
so what would be better than 'unpainted' ? help
replying on Unwed by gilded in gold
19 May 2004, 8:30 PM
ha.. whatever. no sweat.
replying on Unwed by gilded in gold
19 May 2004, 8:27 PM
slow down sasha.. you go too fast.
umm... if you had read it, the title actually is -- Unwed
& my username is --- gilded in gold...
meh.
umm... if you had read it, the title actually is -- Unwed
& my username is --- gilded in gold...
meh.