oh boys boys..what's a villanelle, pray do tell?
i'm only a poor misguided and poorly educated country boy and i don't kow what a villanelle is

what a pair of fucking saps

do you want me to spread it on your toast as well

twotters
twotters
twotters
twotters

villanelle

Brian zodiac...did you know i've got a masters in wibbling
horus8..yeah?...i've got masters in honking
Brian zodiac...in what area did you specialize oh great one?
horus8...parallels
brian zodiac...oh neat...i specialized in twotterism
horus8...was it hard?
brian zodiac...not once you blew me...oh and by the way...solipsistic
horus8...oh well done that man, jolly good pancakes...asphalt, asphalt, asphalt

etc etc

why thank you,

now if you happen to see brian zodiac and horus8 down at the poemrankers arms supping their absinthe and baileys, be sure to pass on my regards

note the emphasis walter zodiac places on "roughly"

oh you wish big boy, you wish

oh fuckin hell...the boys are back in town, been hanging out down at the poemrankers arms again and jimmy zodiac has got a cob on at the idea of someone else blowing horus8...what a prize pair of wankers these two twotters are

oh look at us gosh wibble honk squit squirt..we are both so smart and intimidating yoinks blurt blart!

Jammy zodiac...now how smart is that? about as smart as parallels

really does get me every time

ah horus...displaying signs of the kentucky fried state of mind
a misanthrope or merely missed the boat?
yeh your mate freddy niche didn't have much time for humble folks either, too long gazing into the abyss or too much scratching that syphilis? who cares anyway
i've always been a leg man myself....but then I never got to carry the red basket...still...

parallels!!!!!

I love it, i really do

oh zodiac you're great
no horus you are great
no but zodias you are wonderful can i kiss your clinky bot PLEASE!
no horus you re king of the poemranker
well yeh i'm good but gosh so are you
shall we be, like, homesexual with one another?yeh and keep all these young pups off the site while we are AT IT

hey zode..what all this about ducks and geese hen? oh you cunt...kilkenny/any...beautiful!!!

twotter

wibble

ah Jimmy zodiac wibble wibble honk honk...you've read and voted on "thousands" of poems and are actually proud of the fact....give that man a chocolate mouse...ohhh but i bet you can't wait to show off your poemranker "I've voted for over a thousand poems me!" badge at your annual unpublished writers meetings down the poemrankers arms (real ale only) Gone by the weekend...nah you don't get rid of me that easily although i admit i won't be spending quite as much time here as your good self...it's life Jim, but not as YOU know it wibble wibble honk! I've been a user for over six months now wibble wibble snork...oh shut up you sad sck of shite

horus you bollox..get over the fuckin' chickens man! ..angry chickens/folded eyes...what's the difference?
you are one insecure pretentious twat...but don't worry...i have better things to do with my time than post over a squillion poems on this site in the hope of impressing my peers...tell me this my good man? have you actually ever had any work published....i bet i know the answer to this already

i think this is really good shit, but i see already that as a newcomer to this site that there are one or two characters who see it as their duty to run down anyone they see as a threat to their self elected status as kings of the poetry board with their negative put downs..namely horus8 and zodiac and their little crew wibble wibbble honk!!

anyway keep it up codeine...i've read through some of horus8's stuff and he'd give his right nut to write something like this..i haven't had the time or inclination to check out zodiac yet...but i think i'll knowe whati'll find wibble wibble honk honk

ah zodiac,...i'm surprised you've managed to find the time to remove your tongue from horus8's hole to comment!

yeh read afew got bored...horus8 psuedo pretentious king/queen of the poemranker poetry board...oh but we are all not worthy...whatever...if it all gives some meaning to his worthless existence then what the hell...horus8..self elected intimidator of those he considers his inferior...okay zodiac...you can kiss his ass again now

one of the worst poems ever
a big head in california
the size of horus8's ego
painful if you are a poem
by horus8

the folded way your eyes cave...you really like thaat line don't you..really proud of that one....so good you used it four times

oh bollocks...pretentious twattery from a person who has got nothing better to do with their life than spend it all on this site and writing dull pretentious twattery judging bythe anmount of crap he/she has posted up on here. i was hoping you'd surprise me horus. i was wrong. horus8...king/queen of the poemranker postings...you sad fuxwit

horus...your put downs are witless shit. i hope your poetry is better.

okay codeine kid...i claim full responsiblity for the angry chickens, at least you slag me off with a modicum of wit..horus..you don't like my stuff..have you nothing better to do than to hang around poemranker spilling your not very clever bile with all the rest of us sad little people. Can't wait o check out your own stuff..oh i can't wait