replying on Center Of The Universe by Dovina
21 Jun 2004, 2:24 PM
As a fellow human, I can assume that it applies to all races. As a fellow mamal, I see it in dogs. Insects might be a stretch, but I don't think so.
on Where Else to Start But the End by cleverdevice
21 Jun 2004, 5:08 AM
Sadly true, some good insight. I'd call it free verse and look for ways to shorten it and cull the cliche, "Hell would freeze over."
on an ode to love by francis nor capule
21 Jun 2004, 5:01 AM
One of the best definitions of love I've seen. I really like, "for if logic or reason won over love, would it be the same?" Bravo!
"you thought him" -> you taught him
"you thought him" -> you taught him
replying on Center Of The Universe by Dovina
21 Jun 2004, 4:49 AM
Cruel and biting - the spice of life. And yes on the comma. Thanks.
on Cool In The Army by wilco
20 Jun 2004, 8:29 PM
Funny, funny
on Frozen Soul by TLRufener
20 Jun 2004, 8:16 PM
I don't like about suicide, but if it helps you to cope, then okay. Some redundancies could be omitted like, "The world rushed by me / At an intense pace," as one example. "You quickly broke my neck" was a surprise.
on Time Imperfect by MacFrantic
20 Jun 2004, 8:09 PM
Haunting and good.