on Walk with you by moonlightdance
24 Jun 2004, 7:55 PM
Lose the rhymes and this isn't bad.
on Someday by moonlightdance
24 Jun 2004, 7:53 PM
This isn't that great as a poem, but for some reason I like it. Would be better, methinks, as a lyric.
on Flower of Lebanon by donmiguel1960
24 Jun 2004, 8:03 PM
Some of the rhymes are good and some seem very forced (i.e.- sun/shun). Other than that, not bad.
on Tulips for Penelope by zenhaircut
24 Jun 2004, 8:04 PM
You had me at vodka.