replying on Absolution by Drunk Russian Poet
25 Jun 2004, 12:49 PM
You may well be right about that. I'm sorry to hear that, but it sounds like you're doing a good job carrying on.
replying on That Girl Before by Miggy
24 Jun 2004, 8:57 PM
second that.
replying on Getting the Cool Kids To Like Me by the codeine kid
24 Jun 2004, 8:49 PM
ummmm, hey...you need to....nevermind.
replying on Absolution by Drunk Russian Poet
24 Jun 2004, 8:45 PM
How's this? I think it still has the stigma but the young ones are just too..i don't know...naive? to really understand. On the other hand, if dad's a complete ass, then maybe you just don't care.
replying on Center Of The Universe by Dovina
24 Jun 2004, 8:39 PM
I loves it.
on Tulips for Penelope by zenhaircut
24 Jun 2004, 8:04 PM
You had me at vodka.
on Flower of Lebanon by donmiguel1960
24 Jun 2004, 8:03 PM
Some of the rhymes are good and some seem very forced (i.e.- sun/shun). Other than that, not bad.
replying on The Hot Job by peaceseeker
24 Jun 2004, 7:57 PM
Because we're looking for a poetic life, when it doesn't exist.
on Walk with you by moonlightdance
24 Jun 2004, 7:55 PM
Lose the rhymes and this isn't bad.
on Someday by moonlightdance
24 Jun 2004, 7:53 PM
This isn't that great as a poem, but for some reason I like it. Would be better, methinks, as a lyric.