on Random thoughts poem-do not try to find a meaning for there are too many. by lunar
9 Oct 2007, 6:15 PM
Interesting! But a little confusing! But all-in-all it's pretty good!
on Children in the Storm by thepinkbunnyofdoom
9 Oct 2007, 6:12 PM
The feeling of the poem is expressed well! Good Job!
on You are a divider by Bachus
9 Oct 2007, 6:07 PM
WOW!!! Imagery is effective!
on My first wish and last by Bachus
9 Oct 2007, 6:06 PM
Well Put together! Love it!
on SOMETIMES? by Garrett S Sexton
30 Mar 2006, 11:28 AM
I gave this a 0 because not only is this poem about shit it really is a piece of shit!
replying on Time Will Change by x0lovelylarnx0
29 Mar 2006, 11:30 AM
For one thing I'm certaintly not a man. Sometimes a short poem has more meaning than a long poem. I'm not 9. Some of your poems like like they were written by 5 year olds. Learn how to spell. You couldn't possibly be mature to have put I like horny girls in your profile. How can you say no rudeness intended? That is definitely a rude comment to say the work is lame, but if you put it the way you did: THEWORK IS LAME. I don't know what THEWORK means doesn't look like a word to me.
replying on Time Will Change by x0lovelylarnx0
28 Mar 2006, 11:34 AM
You are so right. He said he was mature, but look it says right in his profile that he likes horny girls. I like that comment.
replying on Time Will Change by x0lovelylarnx0
28 Mar 2006, 11:31 AM
I like your suggestion about the last line, but I will have to think over whether i want to change it or not. I also agree with you on the comments thing, but when I saw that 0 I just boiled.
replying on Time Will Change by x0lovelylarnx0
25 Mar 2006, 5:09 AM
No that poem is not just words jumbled up on paper and also it did not deserve a 0 at all. That poem won contests, and is even in books. I worked hard to write that poem and it just does not desreve a 0. In christian beliefs, on judgement day it is going to be God's choice on whether you have eternal life with him or eternal life in hell. Sounds like to me that sice your comment was sarcastic that you don't believe in God, but that is not a reason to give someone a zero. I'm offened very much by your comment. just because someone has different beliefs doesn't mean that you go off and say something rude to them.
on Holding on for Jesus by Everyone
21 Mar 2006, 5:51 PM
That could be a really good song!!! I love it!! 10 for sure
replying on Soccer by x0lovelylarnx0
19 Mar 2006, 7:10 PM
I have never been out west or north but I have been south and well there isn't to much east I can go because I live on the south eastern coast, but Florida is pretty.Lots of cool partys. LOL.I'd love to leave the states, and go to Scotland and England. I'm Scottish and I'd love to see my clans land and other stuff.
replying on Soccer by x0lovelylarnx0
19 Mar 2006, 5:52 PM
Do you mean Americans dominate everything? You should visit the United States! It's really quite beautiful. Eventhough we are a major power on this Earth. Soccers my sport it is an easy way to get rid of my anger and pain.
replying on The American Soldier by x0lovelylarnx0
19 Mar 2006, 5:48 PM
LOL it's like 8:30 P.M. here lol!! Thanks I wrote that poem a while back I haven't done anything with it yet!
on The Tuesday Dogs by Caducus
18 Mar 2006, 1:07 PM
How sad.
replying on Looking Back by x0lovelylarnx0
18 Mar 2006, 11:14 AM
Lol sorry about that I just took it the wrong way! When I was a kid I always spelled things the way they sounded. A horrible thing to grow up with!!! LOL Cause when we had spelling test I would always do that. I also think elementry fits better elementary sounds funny to me so I don't think I'm going to change it!! Sorry again that I took you the wrong way!
replying on Looking Back by x0lovelylarnx0
18 Mar 2006, 5:28 AM
I actually did not do that on purpose. I made a typing error. But down here were don't say elementary. We say elementry! LOL I had it written down as elementary. I just made a little mistake, and knowbody is perfect.
on Dear George Bush by scitz
19 Nov 2004, 6:54 PM
Your from England. How dare you judge our president. President Bush is way better than John Kerry. John Kerry had Botox injections. To me that sounds a little dumb because he doesn't look any better.
replying on The American Soldier by x0lovelylarnx0
26 Jul 2004, 4:20 PM
No I haven't been a member of this website long.
replying on The Dream by x0lovelylarnx0
25 Jul 2004, 4:06 PM
For one thing the Terza Rima are supposed to only have 10 syllables in each line.