poemranker ::20 most recent comments by T. Jonathron Remp

Comments byT. Jonathron Remp, the 20 most recent. Include replies

on definitely/maybe/mobius by malpaso 15 Oct 2008, 5:15 PM
racism
on Dear God by chesty82 15 Oct 2008, 5:18 PM
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on Bottled Wisdom by Bethy 26 Sep 2008, 12:05 PM
This is an instruction manual to Life.
on Ashes Of Me by Tyler J. Mancini 26 Sep 2008, 2:45 PM
can we use this at our wedding
on Social Studies is for MORANS!! by T. Jonathron Remp 27 Aug 2008, 4:21 PM
You are all the product of VIRAL SOCIAL STUDIES MIND POISON!!!!!!
on Thracian mountains until the Sea by Shardik 29 Jul 2008, 11:39 PM
Well played!!!!!!!!!!!!! SUBMIT MOAR
on Smelly Scum Child. by Y2kSlamPoet 30 Jul 2008, 9:21 AM
Finally, a poem that describes you correctly.
on Sit tight, sweetheart by JMakStak 29 Jul 2008, 11:41 PM
"Cannonball curtains block out
the sun.
One by one they graze your feathers off."

Those are some pretty precise cannonballs.
on Duck Huntin' for this Safe House by Tyler J. Mancini 3 Aug 2008, 3:51 PM
I still can't believe that you've been formally trained in the West Flemish iambics and spent seven summers in the Tamil jungles studying Mayan prose with Professor Gerald Parm. Your roots in classic lyricism have hereby dried, and what is left is this soft, rotted tree that you call a poem. Terrible. Without purpose. Daft. Imbecility.
on Pakistan school massacre by Dhanesh M Kumar 23 Dec 2014, 9:50 AM
pretty good
on what is poetry 101 by Skamper 23 Dec 2014, 9:52 AM
correct
on Water Music, Revisited by http://mulberryfairy 12 May 2009, 3:36 PM
Aphricka is my favourite land aplenty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
on A List of Names That Should SHUT UP by Tyler J. Mancini 1 Dec 2009, 12:09 AM
this poem is DIRT
on hi by pete 6 Jan 2010, 3:36 PM
Winner
on Gerry's Song by ALChemy 29 Mar 2010, 10:08 PM
THIS MAKES MY NECK HARD *0*
on If A Goat by impert&ent 17 Oct 2017, 3:13 PM
-0-, but +1 for not being actual face poison
on Mad by Lenore 17 Oct 2017, 3:15 PM
This poem is so bad it's bad. I'd rather look at homeless knees for 10 minutes.
on Crop Circle by Lenore 17 Oct 2017, 3:17 PM
This poem makes me want to be inside of a tree enveloped completely by tree matter and possibly choke on sap -8-
on Pedophile by Lenore 17 Oct 2017, 3:18 PM
If native plainsmen considered this poem to be a 12th elemental construct of reality, I would annihilate their genetic lineage entire with a hydrogen bomb -3-
on Hollywood Is The Pits by Lenore 17 Oct 2017, 3:20 PM
There is not one single causal strand of the many worlds multiverse that would not have a higher mean expected utility for its constituent beings in which this poem also exists -4-