poemranker ::20 most recent comments by redneck_woman3322 and replies

Comments byredneck_woman3322, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

on The huntsman's secret by Stephen Robins 5 Oct 2004, 5:25 PM
Was surfing through your poems....and this one i really liked...
on Fool by arduinn 5 Oct 2004, 5:14 PM
this could be a really intense poem if you did expand on it...( gosh I hate giving advice)....lots of emotions left unsaid here I think....
on ONCE by jroday 23 Sep 2004, 5:06 PM
Short, sweet, sentimental...and I like that in a poem...I am not the best poet around, I just write what comes to mind....edit when I need to and delete too lol...it all comes with practice...not a one of us are perfect....poetry all means something different to each of us...and as far as rhyming goes, a poem doesn't always have to rhyme....
on I MISS YOU by jroday 23 Sep 2004, 4:58 PM
This is a beautiful poem...I had lost my Father 12 years ago....not the same as a Mother's love....but it is a horrible loss just the same...my heart goes out to you and thank you for commenting on a couple of my poems ( and you are so right about the comments you left)
on Little Dreamer by TLRufener 22 Sep 2004, 3:32 PM
I love this poem....it offers inspiration to many of us...the heart always does know and we can really fly...
on Down Memory Lane by darylchew 22 Sep 2004, 3:22 PM
This is great...this last Summer I actually saw an ice cream truck and his little bell was ringing lol I wanted to run after him....ahhh the good ole days....nothing will ever compare to them....definately this poem brought back memories so it is a 10....
on THE GAME by jroday 20 Sep 2004, 7:28 PM
I think it's good lol made me laugh...
on Old Friends by sliver 20 Sep 2004, 2:10 PM
I thought this poem was absolutely great!
on untitled by AM I EVIL? 20 Sep 2004, 9:56 AM
This is a poem I think a lot can relate to...lots of us are unsure of our thoughts at one point in our lives...this one I liked too...
on FALLING ASLEEP by AM I EVIL? 20 Sep 2004, 9:54 AM
This is a good poem, I really did like it it's a sad poem...because the last line tells us that the person is gone....a lot more could be added to the poem emotionally if you worked on this one....but it is still very good....( I hope you didn' t mind me giving advise, not the best at it...)
on crash&burn by AM I EVIL? 18 Sep 2004, 7:50 PM
You leave the reader anxious to find out the outcome...lots of mystery in your poems...this one I liked too....
on the thrill to kill by AM I EVIL? 18 Sep 2004, 7:48 PM
Actually, it is really good..this sounds like it could actually become a song....very powerful this poem is....
on Stirrings by dougsoderstrom 17 Sep 2004, 2:16 PM
This poem is great...I am always "soul searching"...well written I think....