on Ode to Brittanyy and her Dyke Jacket. by DreamerSupreme
31 Jan 2005, 8:57 PM
Bravo, Bravo!!!
on Interstellar Hell by PsydewaysTears
20 Dec 2004, 9:48 PM
I thought this poem portrayed the meaning very well....It's pretty obvious you're talking about your feelings, 'But I've learned to black out the sky'--Meaning you are holding back and forgetting, almost like one pushes into the darkness of their mind "pain".
This is how I found the poem to be...Maybe a little easily read for me. I mean it has a nice forefront but the inner being of it has been said a million times by other poets. The idea wasn't very original.
Over all though I liked it
This is how I found the poem to be...Maybe a little easily read for me. I mean it has a nice forefront but the inner being of it has been said a million times by other poets. The idea wasn't very original.
Over all though I liked it
on some deleted poem
20 Dec 2004, 9:41 PM
Great description of this wonderful world...enchanted melodies...I agree I could read this poem over and over and still be left with a smile on my face.
on Harry & the Little Bird by Goad
2 Feb 2005, 3:04 PM
I went to college in Schnectady.
on Blue Executioner by Caducus
6 Jan 2005, 9:39 AM
nicely written
on A Picture For Danny by Caducus
17 Jan 2005, 11:19 AM
I always love reading your poems, you actully inspired me to me write one of my poems 'Religious Slaughter'. But this by far the best poem I have read by you :)
on Revaluations by Beyond_Dreams
17 Jan 2005, 11:42 AM
Then would you give me a suggestion on how to better this poem?
on My Poison ( Vodka ) by Brittanyy
31 Jan 2005, 9:04 PM
I hate "now you lay in the flame". And whats so shamefull about hugging the toilet, i've done that a million times gotten up wiped my mouth and drank some more. I'm proud of my drinking binges!
on Worst Sex Ever by Brittanyy
31 Jan 2005, 9:06 PM
fucked w/out a kiss thats what you get
on POEM FOR PREPS by Brittanyy
31 Jan 2005, 4:59 PM
way to many grammer mistakes to take this poem even slightly serious. Sounds a bit angsty and should go under pimple poetry.
on Never Said Thank You by unouluvme
31 Jan 2005, 5:03 PM
Yes I agree you have lack of thought in this poem. If you're going to write a poem that everybody writes about you have knock it out of ball feild to make it stand alone and seprate it from the rest. You failed to do that in this poem.
on The Forgetting by Dovina
7 Jan 2006, 4:03 AM
My grandmother had Alzheimer's, I wish it was as simple as you portrait it here.