replying on Revaluations by Beyond_Dreams
10 Sep 2006, 4:02 PM
Britt I have one word for you, Lame.
on The Forgetting by Dovina
7 Jan 2006, 4:03 AM
My grandmother had Alzheimer's, I wish it was as simple as you portrait it here.
replying on Labeled Retarded by Beyond_Dreams
26 Mar 2005, 6:07 PM
you have to be kidding me...
replying on Enchanted Place by Beyond_Dreams
13 Mar 2005, 5:54 AM
arn't we just the comedian
replying on Enchanted Place by Beyond_Dreams
12 Mar 2005, 11:00 AM
I would provide a link but I can't give you a link to my pictures I create in my mind. I can tell you what I was thinking about when I wrote this poem. A butterfly garden with a stream running through the center. Filled with the obviouse. Sitting on a bench just drawing nature around you untill night fall.
on Harry & the Little Bird by Goad
2 Feb 2005, 3:04 PM
I went to college in Schnectady.
replying on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams
2 Feb 2005, 2:55 PM
Yawn....you really are unoriginal aren't you!
replying on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams
2 Feb 2005, 2:45 PM
Just because a line is similar to that poem does not mean I have to change it. The meaning is different, and besides many poems may have similar lines its when the whole poem is similar where I would start to question the writer. For Example...
San Francisco Blues 'by Jack Kerouac' one of the lines reads like this... "In the calm & peaceful
Night-"
In this poem 'by Kit McCallum' the line reads like this..."The peaceful calm of night."
So you're telling me one of these people has to change their poem because it is very similar to other persons poem?
San Francisco Blues 'by Jack Kerouac' one of the lines reads like this... "In the calm & peaceful
Night-"
In this poem 'by Kit McCallum' the line reads like this..."The peaceful calm of night."
So you're telling me one of these people has to change their poem because it is very similar to other persons poem?
replying on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams
1 Feb 2005, 10:00 AM
Actully I had no idea about that superfamous line, 'She walks in beauty, like the night'. And no i've never read that poem in school or outside of school.
replying on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams
31 Jan 2005, 11:06 PM
and i titled it 'depth of illusion' because if they say a picture is worth a thousand words, then a painting must be worth a million.
on Worst Sex Ever by Brittanyy
31 Jan 2005, 9:06 PM
fucked w/out a kiss thats what you get
on My Poison ( Vodka ) by Brittanyy
31 Jan 2005, 9:04 PM
I hate "now you lay in the flame". And whats so shamefull about hugging the toilet, i've done that a million times gotten up wiped my mouth and drank some more. I'm proud of my drinking binges!
on Ode to Brittanyy and her Dyke Jacket. by DreamerSupreme
31 Jan 2005, 8:57 PM
Bravo, Bravo!!!
replying on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams
31 Jan 2005, 7:20 PM
Here do you think this is better
I hope it gets your panties wetter
This may come as quite a shock
I am a chick therefor I have no cock!
replying on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams
31 Jan 2005, 5:41 PM
considering this poem has nothing to do w/ a man you have to be referring to yourself
on Never Said Thank You by unouluvme
31 Jan 2005, 5:03 PM
Yes I agree you have lack of thought in this poem. If you're going to write a poem that everybody writes about you have knock it out of ball feild to make it stand alone and seprate it from the rest. You failed to do that in this poem.
on POEM FOR PREPS by Brittanyy
31 Jan 2005, 4:59 PM
way to many grammer mistakes to take this poem even slightly serious. Sounds a bit angsty and should go under pimple poetry.
replying on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams
31 Jan 2005, 4:48 PM
Yup I agree, I don't usually write poems w/ rhyme, but this sort of came to me and I havn't worked out all the small kinks yet. But I still feel it has some great potential.
replying on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams
31 Jan 2005, 12:44 PM
Thank You
replying on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams
31 Jan 2005, 11:12 AM
What the hell are you talking about?