on A Wanderlust To The New by fevriere
21 Dec 2004, 10:31 PM
Okay, a bit cheesy but nice work!! Just the rhyme needs a little more work. You start with abcb and end up with aaaa. Anyways, hanks for reading mine. I've posted a new one too. Look at it if you have the chance.
on DJ Bling Bling spins authenticity by Jeremi B. Handrinos
21 Dec 2004, 8:14 AM
Haikus**
on DJ Bling Bling spins authenticity by Jeremi B. Handrinos
21 Dec 2004, 8:13 AM
Nice!! Haikius could be challenging. Well pulled off!!
on A Flower for Monet by Shuushin
21 Dec 2004, 7:57 AM
Love the weave of words. Check me out if you could!!
on Marrowless highway by INTRANSIT
21 Dec 2004, 7:56 AM
Wow!! That's indeed one of the most unique poems I've read in any of the poetry sites. Not flawless definitely, but better than most stuff.
on Into My World by sliver
21 Dec 2004, 7:45 AM
I meant to put "Dedication TO your love...". A typo!!
on Into My World by sliver
21 Dec 2004, 7:43 AM
Renee Blue Eyes!! Dedication your love surely!!
Flowed pretty well towards the end but there was something wrong with the flow initially. Honestly, the 2nd line needs work.
Good work though, I love acrostics. I have many of my own. Hopefully I'd post them soon.
Flowed pretty well towards the end but there was something wrong with the flow initially. Honestly, the 2nd line needs work.
Good work though, I love acrostics. I have many of my own. Hopefully I'd post them soon.