replying on Ode to the inafamous dark angel by Lucifer
13 Jan 2003, 5:02 AM
Blabbit, that has to be one of the most beautiful comments I have read on this site in months. It made me lagh aloud. congratulations. It gets an easy 10. Make a poem out of it so we can vote on it.
on Haffner's Mill by powerline
31 Dec 2002, 10:17 PM
Nice idea, badly done.
on Europeans shouldn't mess with Ronald McDonald because one day he will rule their pathetic "continent" by bondjedi
11 Dec 2002, 6:08 PM
Snails are interesting. One should try them at least once in one's life. But I confess one couldn't take too much at a time. Sort of like snake.
on European Pentameter by bondjedi
1 Dec 2002, 10:58 AM
The last line is brilliant.
on The Slanty Shanty by Quarton
1 Dec 2002, 10:57 AM
Slighty too long.
replying on Perversions by razorgrin
29 Nov 2002, 7:40 PM
Why you infernal little pipsqueak. If you are a joke I am going to flay you alive off the railroad bridge. You never left the anal phase, did you? Perhaps if you removed your head from your mother's asshole you'd gain some brains. Got some problems, little boy? Never got over Mommy no longer breastfeeding you? Annoyed Daddy stopped sodomising you? Nuncle squeeze your balls a bit too tight when you were a kid? You're a shabby little skull fucker who ought to turn to knives that we might be rid of you. Your insults are disgracefully puerile and unimaginative (though the fetus comment almost gets a point or two), and worst of all misspelt. Why don't you go and fuck a kiwi, little New Zealander (or perhaps you actually come from Zealand?). From your sempiternal comments about penile size, I'm going to assume kiwis would be about the right size for you.
on Once upon a Christmas Eve by exoticwriter
29 Nov 2002, 7:23 PM
It would be funnier if it happened on Halloween. And isn't pride the gravest of the Seven Deadlies? Are you advocating SIN? Get away from me! Drop on your knees and PRAY, you terrible, terrible thing!
on Sent from Above by Sugarbbybuttrfly
29 Nov 2002, 7:20 PM
Wow, avoided to actually use the word 'angel'. You get a point for that.
replying on Perversions by razorgrin
29 Nov 2002, 7:00 PM
Whoo! Phookthworld's back! I actually laughed aloud when I read that. You're a joke, aren't you? Aren't you? Surely among dear Razorgrin's friends there's one silly enough to do this. I mean really... you're too brilliantly stupid to be real. Surely it's impossible for this amount of imbecility to be found in nature? Even I would find it hard to believe it could be.
on Lifted from a song- gang bang by UAFANTHORPEY
27 Nov 2002, 6:20 AM
What's the song, 'On top of Old Smokey'?
on The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus
14 Nov 2002, 11:55 AM
I can't help it. Generally, when I see the word 'Crocodile' in a poem, I expect to be amused. You actually managed to use them well. Bravo.
on Ode to the unwanted chip by deadstar
14 Nov 2002, 11:54 AM
No insulting McCain! He lived a bare hour's away from here and is one of the prides of the province, by Gad.
By the way, this isn't TO the chip. It's BY the chip. Change the title to 'The Unwanted Chip's Ode' or something like that.
By the way, this isn't TO the chip. It's BY the chip. Change the title to 'The Unwanted Chip's Ode' or something like that.
on The Fox by cleverdevice
14 Nov 2002, 11:49 AM
Get rid of the last line. Please.
on ... by logun2002ya
14 Nov 2002, 11:46 AM
I'm doing my best not to be you. God spare me from that fate.
on ... by logun2002ya
14 Nov 2002, 11:44 AM
What do you feel on paper? Spores? Chip grease? Old semen?