on ... by logun2002ya
14 Nov 2002, 11:43 AM
'Eye pinch'? God that would hurt.
replying on Prose poem written in 1 minute and 27 seconds while listening to Slim Cessna croon by poetandknowit
14 Nov 2002, 11:42 AM
I'm greatly honoured. I like mine better, though. Is that supposd to be 'hoary' in the first line? (And to be pedantic, it looks rather cut up into lines to be a prose poem.)
on A mans obligation by kliq
12 Nov 2002, 12:12 PM
Please tell me 'tow teachers' isn't a typo. It's much funnier as it is.
on Handy Smurf by Bachus
12 Nov 2002, 11:22 AM
What the devil? Since when has there been one smurf smarter than the others?
Oh, wait, this must be on the TV show or something. I'll stick to the originals, thanks.
Oh, wait, this must be on the TV show or something. I'll stick to the originals, thanks.
on Confusion by ThoughtfulSoul
7 Nov 2002, 8:00 PM
It was horrible. And then the pink hippo appeared. Was it as scary as the real thing is?
on Necromantic Boo-boo by razorgrin
7 Nov 2002, 7:59 PM
Your friends run amok too. You and your insane social circle. Let us hope the zombies hold their liquor as well as your friends. I somehow suspect they're all going to visit the liquor store. Remind them that the Scotch is mine, please.
replying on Killing spree by UAFANTHORPEY
7 Nov 2002, 7:57 PM
Yes.. the sly corbies are a bit close... though of course one would take those sly corbies over this anyday.
on Perversions by razorgrin
7 Nov 2002, 7:55 PM
EEEEWWWW! You're so sick! You're a horrible horrible person and I hope you get kicked off this site and I'm going to set the police on you! These aren't funny at all, these people are all perverts, how can you write about perverts, you must be really wierd. Mommy told me to stay away from people like you. They're all ick!
On a slightly more serious note, the second isn't up to the framing ones.
On a slightly more serious note, the second isn't up to the framing ones.
on I remenber by little_angel_maria
7 Nov 2002, 11:51 AM
So, you realised you had to mature. Dare I ask why you decided not to?
replying on boy girl by little_angel_maria
7 Nov 2002, 9:43 AM
With your comments and poetry, you have abdicated all right to respect.
Actually, I find that the whole last stanza suddenly becomes this angsty affair reeking of cliches. The words in capitals are dreadful, dreadful, dreadful! Bad goth poetry can do no worse. (Actually, it can. But let's not get into that...) It's especially from the beacon image that it seems to go wrong. Actually, when I first read this, I was hoping it would turn out to be a retelling of Ulysses's return to Ithaca.
on Cantos part mmx (The Mud Poem) by bondjedi
6 Nov 2002, 3:14 PM
Alas, -=Dark_Angel=- wannabe, you fail.
on i am genius personified by bondjedi
6 Nov 2002, 3:13 PM
Strangely, I actually like this. How very bizarre. And because I am evil I will vote anyone.
on VINTAGE by bonsaimirror
6 Nov 2002, 3:12 PM
The first line is magnificent. The rest puerile.