replying on Fit for a King by dougsoderstrom
6 Nov 2002, 12:07 PM
OH woe! Woe woe woe! Why did Trudeau have to leave us so soon? How we could have used him now to say 'Fuddle-duddle' to you all!
on Fit for a King by dougsoderstrom
6 Nov 2002, 11:59 AM
This is tripe. Tripe tripe tripe. Somebody should feed you to Sharon.
replying on A dutch poem (just a joke) by susie
6 Nov 2002, 11:05 AM
It's not the first complete foreign language poem here -- there's a Spanish one floating about somewhere. And at some point I will put up some of my french stuff, by special request. English has a great many ressemblances to German; the French impact on it is mainly in the words. Modern English is, after all, a mix of the Saxons language, which was Germanic/Nordic, and the French that the Normans brought with them when they took over the lovely isle back in 1066.
replying on Dead Poets' Society (Joke) by Yardbird
6 Nov 2002, 6:50 AM
Pah. I permit myself pissy little comments on anything I want to, Sir Yarbird! 'Whose', not 'who's', for God's sake. PLEASE. Though Wordsworth's personality is quite well put.
replying on Little Girl and Mom's mistake by t_t_redhot
6 Nov 2002, 6:49 AM
'There is' indeed... People are not asking for more blood here. We are asking for this to be something more than telling us what happened. This reads like a newspaper article. There is nothing interesting about it. It's very sad and all, but nothing more. as I said in a deleted comment, try writing it in nursery rhyme form. That might make it quite touching, if you did it well.
on ... by logun2002ya
6 Nov 2002, 6:10 AM
Eye hate to tell you this, but you haven't improved.
on ... by logun2002ya
6 Nov 2002, 6:09 AM
'You are my vision/of perfect sweet'... You ARE an imbecile.
on rules by roses are read
5 Nov 2002, 7:43 PM
Are those actually line breaks or is it a prose poem? I can't quite tell.
replying on Drinker's Haikus 2a and 2b by cacophony
5 Nov 2002, 12:23 PM
You ought to start on Scotch and stick to it.
on OUR FUTURE? by kliq
5 Nov 2002, 12:21 PM
Babies are made, but they still burn, dearie. Easily.
on untitled2 by PunchMeInTheFace
5 Nov 2002, 12:09 PM
Congratulations. You make me WANT to punch you in the face. Bravo for this piece, which is a magnificent work for getting others to fulfil your desire to get a broken nose. It actually looks as though it might be good. But cut it up, fer gawd's sake, cut it up!
on you are my concert by snacktime
5 Nov 2002, 12:06 PM
Bravo for knowing how to use musical imagery. Even more bravo for knowing how to use the word 'crescendo'.
replying on IM DANCING LIKE WIND by Prince of Void
5 Nov 2002, 12:04 PM
I don't think that would help, somehow.
replying on Wandering Spirit by angel_uy
5 Nov 2002, 12:04 PM
Let us be pithy: what you're trying to say is that it's excessively boring.
on I Love You, My Angel by mytenderrage
5 Nov 2002, 11:46 AM
'Your arms wrap around my FIGURE'? Even by the standards of pimple poetry, that's bad.
on Head-on Collision (True story) by t_t_redhot
5 Nov 2002, 11:45 AM
The ladies have said it all. 'So I have move on'? What?