on Get in Line by MacFrantic
20 Feb 2005, 1:25 PM
A bit vague, but i like the ending
on So I Hear by Vince Dolamando
25 Feb 2005, 10:04 PM
That poem was rather amusing. Especially the part abi=out the "RU-CUS". Funny enough for a 1.
on Untitled by MacFrantic
25 Feb 2005, 10:12 PM
the feet are inconsistent. good effort, maybe just rework it a bit.
on My Wish by Fire_is_cool
25 Feb 2005, 10:19 PM
You have out-cliched cliche. Well done. Sorry if that came across as being insensitive.
on Midnight Chimes by TLRufener
25 Feb 2005, 10:22 PM
This reminds me of "one two, buckle my shoe; three, four, shut the door...etc". Except I enjoy that poem. 2
on Acrostic Terza Rima by Bhaskaryya
25 Feb 2005, 10:34 PM
creative. not terribly meaningful, but the form has some limitations that I must take into account. 7 sounds about right.
on Panda Love by Semper Phildelis
22 Apr 2005, 10:12 AM
this is kind of funny. i think "bang" is kind of harsh. i want to like the male panda, and that means he should be more sensitive to her needs. why odesnt he bring her a bouquet of bamboo shoots or something? (5)
on Butterfly Plague by zodiac
23 Apr 2005, 5:40 PM
i like the imagery of moth wings beating against a window.
on some deleted poem
11 Jun 2005, 1:00 AM
i love the ending 10
on Pandemicâs Here Again by Lenore
12 Jul 2005, 12:10 AM
WHO knows is a clever line. 6
on Almost Persuaded by Dovina
12 Jul 2005, 12:19 AM
I am curious- what is the knowledge we are drooling for? Apart from this, The poem reminds me a bit of a scene from charlie and the chocolate factory, i believe its the scene on the boat. lucky for you, i like that movie, so ill give it a 5.
"Piling things around
Me, in squares, and
Suspensions."