poemranker ::20 most recent comments by crooked_smile and replies

Comments bycrooked_smile, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on tumbleweed by crooked_smile 3 Apr 2005, 12:08 PM
very clever........
replying on bleeding by crooked_smile 12 Mar 2005, 5:15 PM
why thankyou
replying on bleeding by crooked_smile 12 Mar 2005, 5:14 PM
that wouldnt be much to brag about -
lia
replying on Subtle Reasons by crooked_smile 12 Mar 2005, 5:12 PM
of course i read your comment -
lia
replying on Subtle Reasons by crooked_smile 10 Mar 2005, 1:01 PM
thanks - i guess what i meant by "straight answer" is that like, you know, if you believe god is compassionate why is their suffering, if he doesnt know of the suffering then how is he all knowing, if it is because of the devil why does he stop it stuff like that -------

-lia
replying on bleeding by crooked_smile 9 Mar 2005, 6:40 PM
hmm thats nice.......though frankly i have know idea who you are, if you ever get a book let me know and i will check it out

-lia
on oops by jay_dace 9 Mar 2005, 4:01 PM
nice but it would be that much stronger if you took off the "i think" tell us, don't speculate!

without that it would be a 5
with that change more of a 9

ill meet you in the middle and give you a 7

-lia
on My days work by lucky_cmc 9 Mar 2005, 4:00 PM
um, this was not, to be frank, very good
a) we all have a days work to do, and you weren't really compelling enough to make me think yours was special

2)it was rather bland and run of the mill

-lia
on untitled (suggestions wanted) by Don-Quixote 9 Mar 2005, 3:58 PM
i really like this..........
-lia
replying on Losing To Anatomy by Blindpoetry 8 Mar 2005, 12:03 PM
interesting
-lia
on Retirement by Jeremi B. Handrinos 8 Mar 2005, 11:52 AM
this appears to be a bunch of rambling nonsense - 3 -
-lia
replying on The Muses by crooked_smile 7 Mar 2005, 4:28 PM
but was it really about not being able to write a poem?
-lia
on The Ode of Human Life by ShaNoN+960317485 7 Mar 2005, 3:44 PM
interesting - 7 -
-lia
on trapoide by Angel_of_fait 7 Mar 2005, 3:41 PM
this i don't feel was all that good
- 5 -
-lia
on What am I doing? by INTRANSIT 7 Mar 2005, 3:41 PM
this was interesting - and if flowed nicely - 8 -
-lia
on Oh! To be pressed against your windowpane by skaskowski 6 Mar 2005, 6:00 PM
i like it - 8 -
on White Lie by ErgoErgun 6 Mar 2005, 5:59 PM
i hope that the point of this simply went over my head and that it isnt as bad as i think it is
- 5 -
on Of Pride and Climate by MacFrantic 6 Mar 2005, 5:55 PM
i really like this
on His Light by DevilBuni 5 Mar 2005, 8:49 AM
ah, id say this is just a tab bit cliched, and the rhyming is stale and seems forced, you also spelled souless wrong i believe...the idea you are trying to convey are nice but I think you need to liven it up a bit......- 5 -
on You Fell Asleep First by jessicazee 5 Mar 2005, 8:47 AM
ooh i love this
im not sure if you were trying to convey an "inner" meaning, or if you were just giving an illustrative piece but either way i think its excellent - 10 -