poemranker ::20 most recent comments by kev_wannabe

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on Snow by lil_evil_boi 3 Jun 2005, 10:00 PM
ok...u cant actually smell the sweetness of the snow....and if ur trying to be "imaganitive" then its obvious not working...u shuld read more poems...and poems doesnt have to rhyme ^^