replying on Soldier by kev_wannabe
3 Jun 2005, 10:08 PM
sorry its not a cynical twist
replying on Soldier by kev_wannabe
3 Jun 2005, 10:06 PM
dull?? ok... well theres nothing much bout soldiers...cept fighting wars....rescueing others...so...ya..
y not u write one...lyk u can do ne betta^^
y not u write one...lyk u can do ne betta^^
on Snow by lil_evil_boi
3 Jun 2005, 10:00 PM
ok...u cant actually smell the sweetness of the snow....and if ur trying to be "imaganitive" then its obvious not working...u shuld read more poems...and poems doesnt have to rhyme ^^