replying on To Michelle by ALChemy
28 Mar 2006, 7:38 PM
You still amaze me with the poetry in your comments. Ace.
replying on Behind the storm clouds, the moon consoles the sun.(edited) by ALChemy
28 Mar 2006, 7:34 PM
It may or may not be but at least I minimize my crap compared to some of the pretentious, hellacious dumps you've taken.
You bore me. I must go to work now.
You bore me. I must go to work now.
replying on To Michelle by ALChemy
28 Mar 2006, 7:27 PM
Tell me what you've got
when you take a belligerent twat
and mix her with an uptight swot?
By God you have got
another form of TWOTT.
when you take a belligerent twat
and mix her with an uptight swot?
By God you have got
another form of TWOTT.
replying on To Michelle by ALChemy
28 Mar 2006, 7:22 PM
Well, I guess you got me there.
replying on To Michelle by ALChemy
28 Mar 2006, 7:18 PM
How about "TWOTT". That one's brand spanking new.
replying on To Michelle by ALChemy
28 Mar 2006, 7:16 PM
Any style of poetry with the prefix Neo in front of it. Jack Kerouac wrote Haikus.
replying on To Michelle by ALChemy
28 Mar 2006, 7:13 PM
I bet I've written more topical poetry than you. I bet I've said more with less words than you also. I don't mind that you don't have much flexability in your poetry. I rate poetry for what it is. I may not like Jazz but I don't go around saying your music sucks because it's Jazz.
replying on Behind the storm clouds, the moon consoles the sun.(edited) by ALChemy
28 Mar 2006, 6:53 PM
Ya know I almost titled it "The Solar Eclipse" but I didn't want to confuse the meaning of the poem with something that wasn't stormy. (See my explanation above)
replying on Behind the storm clouds, the moon consoles the sun.(edited) by ALChemy
28 Mar 2006, 6:49 PM
Never?: http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
The moon is not the child, the sun is. The moon is me. The sun is my niece. Her parents are on the verge of divorce. Her and her brother just found out today and I spent the day consoling them while their parents yelled at each other in the other room.
The Sun and moon metaphor is a continuation of the one in this poem: http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
The moon is not the child, the sun is. The moon is me. The sun is my niece. Her parents are on the verge of divorce. Her and her brother just found out today and I spent the day consoling them while their parents yelled at each other in the other room.
The Sun and moon metaphor is a continuation of the one in this poem: http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
replying on My Prayer by amanda_dcosta
28 Mar 2006, 5:36 PM
Shameless of me, wasn't it?
on My Prayer by amanda_dcosta
28 Mar 2006, 10:59 AM
Here's my challenge to you: Write a poem about God that never overtly mentions him or anything else that would be directly linked to the bible. Use metaphor or whatever you can think of to make it work. Here's an example: http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
I promise it will make your book that much better.
I promise it will make your book that much better.
replying on Time Will Change by x0lovelylarnx0
28 Mar 2006, 10:46 AM
Of course you're not. In fact you're a "26(?) year old, intelligent, long haired, bohemian rhapsody currently living in a small hut just outside of Hastings, England. I don't work. I am not a conformist. I, like you, am artist, dreamer and revolutionary. Good looking fella, long blond hair, tats and piercings, likes horny girls." Which is all the more reason you should like campbellsoupgrl09. Why not put on some of that English charm we hear about in the states all the time. You don't always have to be Sid Vicious.
replying on A look inside [someone real} by Garrett S Sexton
28 Mar 2006, 8:10 AM
Only if you "sqoeeze" your eyes real tight.
replying on Time Will Change by x0lovelylarnx0
27 Mar 2006, 11:31 AM
Don't bother with him. He's uptight, British and a hypocrite. He's on a mission to change the worlds view of English people as intellectuals.
replying on A look inside [someone real} by Garrett S Sexton
27 Mar 2006, 11:08 AM
Yes, your spelling and punctuation on the other hand is impeccable.
on A Fish is Always a Fish by Dovina
27 Mar 2006, 12:44 AM
"-and I shall make you fishers of men." -Some dude.
Maybe I should convert to Islam. Allah is so much easier for a dyslexic. I suppose I could refer to the Christian god as "Am I that, am I?" or pronounce Jesus as Sausage but that's a mouthful or maybe I could put on my Sean-Johns and walk up to the lord like "Yo, what up Dog?"