Comments byALChemy, 661–680 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Sonnet by zodiac 8 Feb 2006, 6:57 PM
I happen to know where the new trend of poetry should go.
replying on Sonnet by zodiac 8 Feb 2006, 5:47 AM
He hasn't voted on mine lately. It's his rule.
replying on Sonnet by zodiac 7 Feb 2006, 2:23 PM
Are you still listening Amanda?
replying on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy 7 Feb 2006, 2:15 PM
It's just about the spirit of your parents staying with you like guardian angels.
replying on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy 7 Feb 2006, 1:27 PM
Tell her to sign on. Maybe she'll put us all in our place or at least a chosen few.
replying on Sonnet by zodiac 7 Feb 2006, 1:06 PM
Leda is a rape fantasy as is this painting by Fuseli.
http://www.litgothic.com/Images/fuseli_nightmare.jpg
A theme still relevent today but unnoticed by modern culture do to it's old structure.

I would like to think my theme is more universal, as modern as it is old.
replying on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy 7 Feb 2006, 12:43 PM
That's because you're writing Dovina poetry. It's what you expect Dovina to write. I bet Dovina has a sister that can write some bad-ass rhymes.
replying on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy 7 Feb 2006, 12:27 PM
Har-har:)

Let me know if you spot any old ones you like. I'll tell him to post them.
replying on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy 7 Feb 2006, 12:17 PM
Imago died young of self-embarrassment and he willed his stuff to me.
replying on Sonnet by zodiac 7 Feb 2006, 12:14 PM
Do you know what Yeats is talking about in the sonnet?

Don't get me wrong. I'm an old school poetry guy myself.
I was basically asking Zodiac if he didn't use the old standard form because he thought it was boring. It does have it's troubles working into modern themes.
replying on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy 7 Feb 2006, 12:06 PM
Good research. What name do you use over there?

Ps. Don't snitch.
on Sonnet by zodiac 7 Feb 2006, 11:33 AM
bazaar, urchin, clavicle, deadwood, bull's-eye, hobnailed, obsequious, argyle, newsprint, sunstruck, klar(I have no idea what that means), and buoy.

Didn't Ginsberg used to do things like that, like cutting out newspaper articles for inspiration?
on Sonnet by zodiac 7 Feb 2006, 10:58 AM
Reminds me of Ginsberg's supermarket minus the poet comparisons.
replying on Sonnet by zodiac 7 Feb 2006, 10:47 AM
Umm, because "good" sonnets are boring?
replying on Sonnet by zodiac 7 Feb 2006, 7:59 AM
If he was incapable of writing a decent more formal version of a sonnet I could see where you'd have a complaint but he can do formal too.
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=97969
replying on An Understanding Woman by Dovina 6 Feb 2006, 11:48 PM
It differs depending where you are. Some places even use a different color code. Way back when I worked at Sam's Club the codes were; Black:Dangerous weather or blackout, Red:Fire, Orange:Chemical spill, Blue:Medical emergency, Brown:Bomb threat, Code Adam was a missing child- and so on and so on. The procedures differ as well. It's funny, if you're in Sam's Club and you hear "Code Black" you're going to remember that show and run out of the building and probably into a tornado or something.
replying on An Understanding Woman by Dovina 6 Feb 2006, 3:39 PM
You certainly must admire the gall to build an episode around something as ridiculous as accidentally firing and injecting a bazooka shell into yourself. Now if Richard Gere had done it I would have bought the premise entirely.
replying on time (3rd draft) by Adriaan 6 Feb 2006, 7:21 AM
What do you really think he's thinking?
I think he's thinking "bbrrbblbllgrrbbll-bloopploop".
replying on An Understanding Woman by Dovina 6 Feb 2006, 5:48 AM
Damn and I thought she meant something less profound.
on An Understanding Woman by Dovina 5 Feb 2006, 4:47 PM
Some men can break a woman's heart with surgical skill.