Comments byALChemy, 641–660 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Happy 40th Anniversary by Dovina 13 Feb 2006, 9:42 PM
Nice sentiment.
replying on A Midnight Call by amanda_dcosta 13 Feb 2006, 9:30 PM
Kneeling would be much more appropriate for worshiping me.
replying on A Midnight Call by amanda_dcosta 13 Feb 2006, 9:28 PM
Have you fucked any of them? Then how do you know they aren't?
replying on In response to by INTRANSIT 13 Feb 2006, 9:25 PM
Funny, I just thought it sounded funny.
replying on Valentine by zodiac 13 Feb 2006, 9:21 PM
I like this kind of biographical poetry and I'm glad to see you do too.
replying on A Midnight Call by amanda_dcosta 13 Feb 2006, 8:52 PM
There is a fucking god and that fucking god is me. Alchemy, the God of Fucking.
replying on In response to by INTRANSIT 13 Feb 2006, 8:08 PM
Don't wizz on the electric fence - Ren & Stimpy
on Valentine by zodiac 13 Feb 2006, 8:06 PM
You've surprised me with your choice of subject.
Speaking the mind of a real person you have no personal affiliation with? Dovina certainly has stamped her great influence on us all.
"imagines the future like a train bearing down fast." is a great line.
replying on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy 12 Feb 2006, 9:32 PM
Yeah, it does kinda remind me of her stuff.
replying on Sonnet by zodiac 9 Feb 2006, 9:48 AM
Nice.
Is this a response to where the new trend of poetry should go or a response to the old form being relevent?
replying on Penny Loafer Blues by ALChemy 9 Feb 2006, 9:27 AM
I did mean the double meaning but I think it might have gotten through even if I had used the correct spelling.
replying on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy 9 Feb 2006, 7:41 AM
"whopping great urn" Sounds like a great description for this website.
replying on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy 9 Feb 2006, 7:33 AM
Thanks for the link.
I was looking into the Mary Magdalen stuff a while back. She get's very poetic when she talks about Jesus.

Thank God I kept my poem shorter than that though.
on Hailing Miriam by Ranger 9 Feb 2006, 7:13 AM
It moves along quite swiftly or maybe that's just how I chose to read it(I don't know) but when I read it at that pace I found it quite passionate.
replying on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy 9 Feb 2006, 7:06 AM
No, but a couple months ago I was scanning through a couple articles and even saw a show on the History Channel-(I think) about the Gnostic Gospels. If you've got a link to that I'd be more than glad to take a look at it though.
replying on My Father’s World by Dovina 9 Feb 2006, 7:01 AM
I only meant use the ("") so it looks more intentional and less like you were at a loss for the right words a just stuck a cliche in to get you to the next line.

By the way- Love the "gumption" "unction" half rhyme.
on My Father’s World by Dovina 9 Feb 2006, 6:02 AM
Not quite sure about the capital F in the first "Fire".
If "More than you can shake a stick at" was something he said alot (which is just my hunch) then put it in quotations please. I thought it was a great sentiment and quite deep. Well expressed D.
replying on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy 9 Feb 2006, 5:53 AM
No, I'm thinking his humor is more pot induced sarcasm and so is best a-la bong.
replying on Lonely Road by drnick 9 Feb 2006, 5:48 AM
-Then you should bestow your intelligent advice upon us a little more.
replying on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy 8 Feb 2006, 7:00 PM
Thanks, I discovered once while in art school that "The Shining" is the funniest movie ever if you're sloshed when you watch it.