Comments byALChemy, 1181–1200 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on For my unborn by Caducus 2 Dec 2005, 2:53 PM
seems to personal to tarnish with criticism or vote.
replying on Silent Night by Dovina 2 Dec 2005, 2:46 PM
Yep, that's my point.
replying on The Bus by Dovina 2 Dec 2005, 2:44 PM
I'm sure that's the case with indians too.
replying on A Modern Woman by Dovina 2 Dec 2005, 5:15 AM
I guess it's partly because around here if you don't back your arguments up with some kind of legitimate documented support than people just fart in your face and accuse you of being full of shit. I honestly think you're much smarter than me in many ways but you'll leave little holes in your arguments were people can trump you by pointing out such pointless things as misspelled words or bad grammar or just a slight miswording. Then ignoring the actual point you were trying to make. I know I'm probably guilty of those very things but usually it's for the sake of humor.
on Shamefaced by Doug 2 Dec 2005, 4:54 AM
Offbeat but also off beat. Some apostrophe problems.
Edit and make some cuts. 7
replying on Silent Night by Dovina 1 Dec 2005, 6:11 PM
Yours is blasphemy because it's still talking about subjects related to the bible (go ahead and lie and say it doesn't). It's all about the Da Vinci Code which I'm actually not sure is blasphemous. But yours is vulgar (as you said before) so it's surely blasphemous.
replying on A Modern Woman by Dovina 1 Dec 2005, 5:55 PM
I'm talking about not taking what the preacher says as the Gospel truth.
replying on A Modern Woman by Dovina 1 Dec 2005, 5:53 PM
So you're saying you and your poems aren't worth the effort. Agreed.
I didn't seek out anything. It started with a gift. I thought you'd like it. You stated something I disagreed with and God forbid I gave you my opinion. I saw something about the Mary Gospel on the history channel. I thought, "Dovina might get a kick out of this". It took me all of 30 seconds to find the link.
Merry Christmas Scrooge.
replying on A Modern Woman by Dovina 1 Dec 2005, 5:30 PM
For the same reason you don't take everything I say for the gospel.
replying on Silent Night by Dovina 1 Dec 2005, 5:22 PM
Notice he wasn't offended by mine and I was even a little bit racist in it.

I wasn't offended. I just thought it was offensive and the other replies prove me right.
on Thunder by dooley 1 Dec 2005, 11:33 AM
I read the comment so I didn't need to read the poem. I'm so sleepy. Sorry. Here>-10-
replying on Thunder by dooley 1 Dec 2005, 11:31 AM
It is one of my goals to some day rhyme above and love in a way that is not cliche at all.
replying on Chills by BrandonW 1 Dec 2005, 11:25 AM
-as in 8-ball.
on Chills by BrandonW 1 Dec 2005, 11:23 AM
And you bought it around the corner from a pusher named Jesus. The religion/drug addiction metaphor is a bit cliche but you got some really nice lines in there.
Mind if I snort a couple? -8-
replying on Chills by BrandonW 1 Dec 2005, 10:58 AM
"I offer another snort"

Merry Christmas BrandonW.
on Virtue and Sin by dooley 1 Dec 2005, 10:51 AM
Simple yet very effective. I want to hear more about the racoon and snake.

Here's what I've learned. It's as simple, sad and cliche as the old opposites attract adage. We're hypocrites because we complain about it and without realizing it we go and do the same thing. They're really not all that different from us on the inside. Unless you're talking about the vagina. -9-
replying on Virtue and Sin by dooley 1 Dec 2005, 10:30 AM
Are you home yet? I seem to sense the Christmas spirit rising in you lately.
replying on The Bus by Dovina 1 Dec 2005, 10:26 AM
There was a popular saying we had in art school. "You can't copyright an idea."

I give you a -9- Dovina for thinking like an Indian.
replying on Silent Night by Dovina 1 Dec 2005, 10:05 AM
Thinking outside the box again.
replying on Silent Night by Dovina 1 Dec 2005, 10:01 AM
To an atheist it wouldn't be. It's like if I made fun of Thor.