| Re: Posted Pelicans by Dovina |
4-Nov-05/4:54 PM |
Has a nice sound to it but it leaves a lot of questions. What do you mean by "calks"? Why are pelicans there in the winter time? "sadness sweetly coming"? Why 13 birds? What's it about? My guess, getting pregnant.
I wouldn't mind a few more stanzas given it's pleasant meter.
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| Re: a comment on Steak and Satin by Dovina |
3-Nov-05/11:42 AM |
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I've got a third one but it's for sitting on.
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| Re: a comment on Dear George Bush by scitz |
3-Nov-05/11:22 AM |
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That's because democrats tend to be isolationist pussies.
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| Re: a comment on Steak and Satin by Dovina |
3-Nov-05/7:02 AM |
If you are one. That would explain your Diva-like name.
Now get me my beer WENCH!
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| Re: a comment on Dear George Bush by scitz |
3-Nov-05/6:52 AM |
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Your statement has us pissing in our pants. But it's not out of fear.
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| Re: Dear George Bush by scitz |
3-Nov-05/6:49 AM |
Millions of people in England will soon be suing you for plagiarism.
I'm guessing the big space in the middle is where you sprinkle the anthrax.
When they take one of those bus bombs and drive it into Westminster Abbey during a royal wedding then you can talk to us about our leaders. Till then worry about old Tony and how soon before one of your slutty popstars pops Prince William's cherry.
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| Re: ~PROM MEANS 2 ME~ by T. Jonathron Remp |
3-Nov-05/6:31 AM |
Aperrantly youor parants passt allong thiere traddishun
uv mispeling 2 U.
I don't know if your poem represents the prom very well but it's a perfect example of the second part.
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| Re: a comment on Steak and Satin by Dovina |
2-Nov-05/4:14 PM |
A nice poem about masterbation.
I give this poem two nipples up. (*Y*)
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| Re: a comment on Steak and Satin by Dovina |
2-Nov-05/11:19 AM |
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But it's what you asked for.
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| Re: 'Fucky Fucky 5 Dollar' by scitz |
2-Nov-05/11:17 AM |
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Ironically it coincides with recent topics of conversation on Poemranker. But that's probably why you reposted it.
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| Re: Asylum by TLRufener |
2-Nov-05/11:10 AM |
It has a Langston Hughes/Mia Angelo quality to it.
Drug is a medication or narcotic. You mean dragged. Although drugged would make it the most interesting line in the poem.
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| Re: a comment on Steak and Satin by Dovina |
2-Nov-05/10:45 AM |
Buuurrrrrrrrrrrrpppp!! Now get me another beer wench.
My vote is for Busch.
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| Re: a comment on The Queen Mums Teeth by scitz |
2-Nov-05/10:39 AM |
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Yes. Transvestites are wankers too.
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| Re: a comment on I don't rhyme enough, eh? by Niphredil |
2-Nov-05/7:48 AM |
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Forget the "No" I missread you the first time.
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| Re: a comment on Steak and Satin by Dovina |
2-Nov-05/7:45 AM |
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But only while having Mandingo sex.
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| Re: a comment on The Queen Mums Teeth by scitz |
2-Nov-05/7:40 AM |
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I clicked the Poemwanker link and got a wanker list. Turns out you have quite a following. How flattering it must be for you.
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| Re: a comment on I don't rhyme enough, eh? by Niphredil |
2-Nov-05/7:32 AM |
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| Re: Steak and Satin by Dovina |
2-Nov-05/6:06 AM |
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Is that all you women ever think about? Sheesh!
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| Re: a comment on The Queen Mums Teeth by scitz |
2-Nov-05/6:02 AM |
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What's up with the orange Ws?
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| Re: a comment on I don't rhyme enough, eh? by Niphredil |
2-Nov-05/5:41 AM |
How true, how true.
Have you seen that Tony Sinclair dude in those Tanqueray ads?
Makes you feel good to be white again don't it?
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