on Dreams by lil_evil_boi
8 Jun 2005, 7:04 AM
How 'bout "This is an egg. This is an egg on crack. Any questions."
replying on The Comedy of Mighty Rockmage: Combatting Old Age. by Don-Quixote
8 Jun 2005, 6:47 AM
Assuming this is D_Q. I was actually talking about all the ranting in your comment and reply boxes. Which by the way I found very entertaining. "My lil slothful Miggletoe?" made me laugh my ass off.
replying on -750,000 in Rwanda by ALChemy
8 Jun 2005, 5:26 AM
Thank you Dovina. I'll drop that last verse. I look forward to reading some of your work soon.
on -750,000 in Rwanda by ALChemy
7 Jun 2005, 6:52 PM
I think you might be right about the last verse.
It was a bad Idea to drop pop culture into this and the shame on you message is redundant.
The second verse was intended to point out the rest of the worlds ignorance to what was going on but I think I can change the last part a little to add to my point.
But I'll have to work on that later.
It was a bad Idea to drop pop culture into this and the shame on you message is redundant.
The second verse was intended to point out the rest of the worlds ignorance to what was going on but I think I can change the last part a little to add to my point.
But I'll have to work on that later.
on The Comedy of Mighty Rockmage: Combatting Old Age. by Don-Quixote
7 Jun 2005, 3:44 PM
You'd think you would have vented all your hostility in your poetry but your cup overflows don't it.
This guy must be the thorn in your side. Here's a band-aid -10-
This guy must be the thorn in your side. Here's a band-aid -10-
on Bunnies crazy inlove by kev_wannabe
4 Jun 2005, 5:58 PM
It would make a good song though.
on Vote Goats by ALChemy
4 Jun 2005, 5:55 PM
Thank you all for your comments. Some classier than others. It was a poem I penned out quickly in response to those who would rather insult you than help you.
on The Comedy of Mighty Rockmage: Combatting Old Age. by Don-Quixote
4 Jun 2005, 5:42 PM
Hypocrite.
on Writing dessert by INTRANSIT
4 Jun 2005, 9:37 AM
This poem makes me hungry.
coincidentally my nieces cake is like poetry.
It deserves an eat-I mean an 8
coincidentally my nieces cake is like poetry.
It deserves an eat-I mean an 8
on A Fool's Errand by ALChemy
4 Jun 2005, 9:18 AM
Yeah I was going for the fact that we put strain on our wrists when we write, draw, paint etc. and the blood was the essence we put into our art. But I'm sure it probably has been used a hundred times.
on The world's shortest poem by ALChemy
4 Jun 2005, 9:08 AM
The idea is in the spelling... I know. Corny poem. I apologize.
on Soldier by kev_wannabe
4 Jun 2005, 8:48 AM
You mean "evil that lurks (in) this place"?
Unpeacefulness?
I'm all in for inventing words but this is too direct a poem for taking such liberties. I like the no BS approach though.
Unpeacefulness?
I'm all in for inventing words but this is too direct a poem for taking such liberties. I like the no BS approach though.
on Bunnies crazy inlove by kev_wannabe
4 Jun 2005, 8:38 AM
This is either a brilliant piece of sarcasm or a chocolate covered turd.
on Carte Blanche by ALChemy
4 Jun 2005, 7:18 AM
I used "schizophrenic" because people look like there talking to themselves and when one rings like 5 different people try to answer thier phones.