replying on Nonsense POEM #14687 by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk
20 Jun 2005, 1:02 PM
only people I've ever heard say "cuppa" were from New Zealand.
replying on Fatherâs Day by Dovina
20 Jun 2005, 11:46 AM
a poem that intends to teach isn't by its nature a bad thing.
replying on Nonsense POEM #14687 by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk
20 Jun 2005, 9:47 AM
you couldn't be more wrong. I thought long and hard over whether it should be an elephant or an orangutan..or a yellow line... and waiting for crepes or waffles...
actually.. I never thought anything. bravo.
actually.. I never thought anything. bravo.
replying on grin and stand by celticskatermatt1
19 Jun 2005, 7:59 PM
you're right.. this guy could be screwed for the foreseeable future....and we will have to simply hope he will start to write his poetry in a Word Document with red underlines.
on Naughty Poems (R) by untamed_fierce
19 Jun 2005, 7:41 PM
http://www.lotsofjokes.com/cat_312.htm
They Are plagiarized. Here is a sight with all of the above located on the same page.
They Are plagiarized. Here is a sight with all of the above located on the same page.
on Being Alone by Sunshine Conkey
19 Jun 2005, 7:33 PM
I was trying to figure out the rhyme scheme. I see in the first two stanzas you rhyme lines 2 and 4. Then a five line 5th stanza with a rhyme in lines 3 and 4.
was this the plan?
was this the plan?
replying on Fatherâs Day by Dovina
19 Jun 2005, 7:27 PM
Caught up in worrying about dying, and coping with change in all aspects of culture and technology, never helped anyone's disposition... but I agree that it is an avoidable trap.
on Fatherâs Day by Dovina
19 Jun 2005, 7:17 PM
I disagree with your premise. I am sorry you aren't aware of many old men that don't fit this stereotype.
I'll try not to write about a woman's relationship with her mother to avoid the same trap.
I'll try not to write about a woman's relationship with her mother to avoid the same trap.
on grin and stand by celticskatermatt1
19 Jun 2005, 5:46 PM
spell check.
replying on White Stork by Blue Magpie
19 Jun 2005, 5:40 PM
just leave out the word subtler, or quieter, in line seven. it shortens the line a bit, but gives it a good rhythm.
replying on Nonsense POEM #14687 by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk
19 Jun 2005, 2:49 PM
gosh. never heard of traditional nonsense poetry.
on All in Love by gothiclovepoetiss
18 Jun 2005, 11:05 PM
sometimes feelings lie
on It Could Be Worse by smiffy84
18 Jun 2005, 5:03 PM
Blair Witched?
on At The End by lil_evil_boi
18 Jun 2005, 5:00 PM
no
on This or That by sacred_poet_me
18 Jun 2005, 4:56 PM
Romantics Facing Reality -- meetings at 8PM at the International Order of Oddfellows Hall.
on Diary of sorrow.... by dantron
18 Jun 2005, 4:53 PM
you're spelling is awesome.
replying on Feed The War Machine by smiffy84
18 Jun 2005, 4:47 PM
I still blame them for not understanding what training with a rifle ultimately means.
replying on Sisyphus' wife by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk
18 Jun 2005, 12:33 PM
That is precisely where I got those words... Miles Davis.
on Feed The War Machine by smiffy84
17 Jun 2005, 11:47 PM
most generals I've seen (excluding Stormin' Norman) are not fat.. they are quite trim, in fact.
We all have to die. Nobody makes anybody enlist in the armed services anymore. It's like saying "My life is not worth preserving" when you sign up.
We all have to die. Nobody makes anybody enlist in the armed services anymore. It's like saying "My life is not worth preserving" when you sign up.