on A limerick by smiffy84
17 Jun 2005, 11:43 PM
I think Joseph Smith was an idiot.
on word splatter by nentwined
17 Jun 2005, 11:39 PM
graphic
replying on word splatter by nentwined
17 Jun 2005, 11:39 PM
I think because she is covered in puke.
replying on missing pieces by mystic enoch
17 Jun 2005, 11:38 PM
well. step 1. Use a thesaurus. Broken -- busted -- wrecked -- bent -- bruised -- mangled -- tortured -- trashed --...
but don't say.. "Its all broken. Now I must fix this broken thing." eww. yuck. and "it's all broken" is bad too. try.. "it's broken"..
"You have crushed it
now I must tend this
mangled vessel." --
but don't say.. "Its all broken. Now I must fix this broken thing." eww. yuck. and "it's all broken" is bad too. try.. "it's broken"..
"You have crushed it
now I must tend this
mangled vessel." --
on missing pieces by mystic enoch
17 Jun 2005, 12:24 PM
not as good as the JOEY one.
on For the love of joey(revised) by mystic enoch
17 Jun 2005, 12:23 PM
"for the love of you" is just bad.
the genitive form of YOU is YOUR.
"for your love" is a song by a reggae band (King Konga) a Country Artist (Chris LeDoux), and a classic sixties rock song (yardbirds). I even think Stevie Wonder sang a song titled For your Love.
okay. bye.
the genitive form of YOU is YOUR.
"for your love" is a song by a reggae band (King Konga) a Country Artist (Chris LeDoux), and a classic sixties rock song (yardbirds). I even think Stevie Wonder sang a song titled For your Love.
okay. bye.
on Love by untamed_fierce
17 Jun 2005, 12:46 AM
good start.. where are the other stanzas?
I'll vote when you're done.
I'll vote when you're done.
replying on Sisyphus' wife by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk
16 Jun 2005, 1:42 PM
bitches is the right word. More than one bitch in this brew. maybe bitches'?
on When the muse calls. by darby pyn
16 Jun 2005, 11:58 AM
inhibitions instead of inabitions.. because inabitions is not a word. a great word instead of inabitions would be inanitions.
inanitions means exhaustion, as from lack of nourishment or vitality. This would make the next line about starving flow.
inanitions means exhaustion, as from lack of nourishment or vitality. This would make the next line about starving flow.
replying on Eulogy for a Poet by Dovina
16 Jun 2005, 11:52 AM
sorry.. just meant that I like those lines.
replying on Sisyphus' wife by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk
16 Jun 2005, 11:49 AM
http://www.grammarbook.com/punctuation/apostro.asp
Thank you good sir. It does require an additional s.
Thank you good sir. It does require an additional s.
on Eulogy for a Poet by Dovina
16 Jun 2005, 11:24 AM
Frost in his belly
fire in his heart
fire in his heart
on I AM WHO I AM by blackthoughtz1
16 Jun 2005, 10:59 AM
paradigm best explains you?
A pattern or model best explains you? huh.. strange. then you say you are outside of the box. cognitively dissonant. hmm.
A pattern or model best explains you? huh.. strange. then you say you are outside of the box. cognitively dissonant. hmm.
on Don't be gay by wCUNTw
16 Jun 2005, 10:54 AM
it rhymes, so it must be true.
on Between the Edges by woodstock20000
15 Jun 2005, 2:49 PM
loving/hating -- wonderful/wrenching.
I tend to use this type of dissonance too much in what I write about love.
I tend to use this type of dissonance too much in what I write about love.
replying on it's tough at times by Jigg
14 Jun 2005, 8:06 PM
I'll let you know if either happens for me.
replying on Youth Spent by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk
14 Jun 2005, 11:07 AM
happily married and mushy. It's pretty sappy I admit.
on Sudden Change by Dovina
14 Jun 2005, 1:00 AM
Fine