poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk (101-120) and replies

Comments byBankrupt_Word_Clerk, 101–120 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Prickly Pear by Dovina 14 Jun 2005, 12:59 AM
and I stare at the San Bernardino mountains and hope the fires don't start again.. .but with all the rain... who knows?
on Prickly Pear by Dovina 14 Jun 2005, 12:58 AM
I self-define as a cactus that wants a hug.
on Panama by Dovina 14 Jun 2005, 12:57 AM
raunchy
on Returning by Dovina 14 Jun 2005, 12:55 AM
I thought of cigarettes when I read this. Camel hard pack. I have no idea why.
on Racism by Dovina 14 Jun 2005, 12:54 AM
I like this poem.
on Unclean by Dovina 14 Jun 2005, 12:36 AM
I disagreed with the general premise of your poem.

However, I did see the images in my head as I read it.
replying on Unclean by Dovina 14 Jun 2005, 12:35 AM
It's also an insensitive poem. In fact, it's as intolerant as Jew-hating; In my humble opinion.
replying on Flamingo's Stare by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 14 Jun 2005, 12:19 AM
do you mean 'without' the restraints?
on Emotionally Unavailable by horus8 13 Jun 2005, 1:02 PM
I haven't got the words.
on A Hallmark Card for You (With Love) by Bluemonkey 13 Jun 2005, 11:45 AM
I confess.
on May 10, 2004 by Patsy 13 Jun 2005, 12:49 AM
Misery is a woman. Ha! nice.
on Labor. by darby pyn 10 Jun 2005, 11:44 PM
I like this. At first I wished you had changed the format so that I could see the rhyme...but nah.. I just like it. almost makes me think of a hard core Dr. Suess book in meter.
on Acrylic French Nails by Dovina 10 Jun 2005, 12:12 PM
"Where were the color ordinary" -- hard to say out loud.
replying on Missing by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 10 Jun 2005, 11:57 AM
1. no. there is no way to wonder besides to yourself.. unless you say, "i wondered out loud" or something along those lines.
2. The darkness is just dark and fog. the darker it gets the less of her features are available to my eyes.
thanks for your critique.
replying on Missing by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 10 Jun 2005, 9:47 AM
Fraud? no. I don't believe I took anything from another poem. struggling poet, yes.
on it's tough at times by Jigg 10 Jun 2005, 2:03 AM
cries
replying on Haiku String of the Bee by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 10 Jun 2005, 12:26 AM
k
on Friends? by poodietat 8 Jun 2005, 2:58 PM
interesting take on friendship.
replying on Haiku String of the Bee by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 8 Jun 2005, 2:51 PM
I don't know.. maybe love for king is unlikely.. but part of me thinks that love is what motivates devotion to a queen... just being a lamer romantic.