poemranker ::20 most recent comments by tianyi

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on Emotionally Unavailable by horus8 15 Sep 2005, 4:47 PM
yes
on loud clubbin by ay deee 16 Sep 2005, 10:33 AM
The relationship between thick cut rug and invisible trousers is intriguing. Do you wear the rug like a large conical skirt?

I enjoyed this.
on Unbroken Horses by Caducus 16 Sep 2005, 9:57 AM
I liked

when she died face down
on fresh linen.

'Beauty' was shot in the hind leg
tried to stand three times but fell.

But all in all not enough insight or images that will stick in my mind. It reads like hopelessly melancholic list of how crap things are. "Grandma's dead, I'm a bastard, Grandpa shot my horse, Grandpa's dead"

Perhaps just focus on one of these.
on nicholson by ay deee 19 Sep 2005, 1:08 PM
right on