on Flea poem by Sing4Jesus!
26 Oct 2006, 9:58 AM
Magnificent!
on Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! by Sing4Jesus!
26 Oct 2006, 9:59 AM
The last stanza gives me hope for mankind.
on Tony Blair's sagging purple johnny by Stephen Robins
3 Nov 2006, 5:22 AM
Who's VioletSuede, Stevie?
on some deleted poem
3 Nov 2006, 5:20 AM
This is one of your better efforts. I have been to Australia which is a beautiful country inhabited by a load of twats plus the orientals and the abos.
Only the British could have hit on the delicious irony of shipping their convicts to such a nice place.
Only the British could have hit on the delicious irony of shipping their convicts to such a nice place.
on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove
3 Nov 2006, 5:04 AM
Right on, Edna. I get pissed off with all these namby-pambies rabbiting on about drinking and driving. Most accidents are caused by unlicensed yobs (often Afros) who can't drive and who have no insurance (mainly becaused the car has been stolen).
on Going Away to Fight a War by wilco
3 Nov 2006, 5:08 AM
Boring tripe. Learn the difference between
ITS
and
IT'S
before writing anything again.
ITS
and
IT'S
before writing anything again.
on Cool In The Army by wilco
3 Nov 2006, 5:10 AM
Yes, anyone who joins the army is dumb and deserves to get put into a body bag.
on Jesus Around Your Neck (Final Version) by Wakeboarder20
3 Nov 2006, 5:14 AM
I am pleased I missed the previous version(s) - they must have sucked bigtime!
on James The Dashing Pirate by thepinkbunnyofdoom
3 Nov 2006, 5:15 AM
Puerile.
on some deleted poem
3 Nov 2006, 5:16 AM
Potential.
on Don't touch the chairs in a gay bar. by Stephen Robins
3 Nov 2006, 5:17 AM
This is excellent. Why was his stool hanging out? Had you answered that I would say 10/10. As it is it has to be an 8/10.
on some deleted poem
3 Nov 2006, 5:18 AM
You poems range from the realy excellent to the really crap. Guess which this one is. 1/10
on In a Church by Sasha
13 Nov 2006, 9:53 AM
Religious bollox.
on Edna's Lovely World Cup Poem by Edna Sweetlove
13 Nov 2006, 9:56 AM
This gives me mixed feelings; football is working class trash, so if I praise the poem, am I praising football?
on some deleted poem
14 Jan 2007, 11:55 AM
Archaic, not an original thought or concept in sight. Totally terrible. I shat myself reading it.
on some deleted poem
14 Jan 2007, 11:57 AM
Dreary, longwinded, pompous, derivative tripe.
on some deleted poem
14 Jan 2007, 11:54 AM
I was amused at your author's biog. I quote:
"I enjoy new writing challenges and rspond to critique in two ways,posotive criticism where the person has expressed a way to improve the poem or a suggestion in the same vein i am happy to accept and send thanks, stupid rude unecessary comments i respond with venom! I enjoy writing to other poets and reading their work which i belive is a helpful way to improve my own writing and try different disciplines in poetry writing."
I am delighted to meet someone whose spelling is second only to his inability to write poetry. 0/10.
"I enjoy new writing challenges and rspond to critique in two ways,posotive criticism where the person has expressed a way to improve the poem or a suggestion in the same vein i am happy to accept and send thanks, stupid rude unecessary comments i respond with venom! I enjoy writing to other poets and reading their work which i belive is a helpful way to improve my own writing and try different disciplines in poetry writing."
I am delighted to meet someone whose spelling is second only to his inability to write poetry. 0/10.
on some deleted poem
14 Jan 2007, 11:59 AM
I was pleased when I finished reading this. Pleased there was no more. Don't give up the day job.