I don't know I guess because I'm in love I love saying the word love more and love writing love more. Love is a lovely cliche don't you think. Besides, girls love to hear there men do all that love talk. I imagine my poems soon will start sounding like "Love and love went up a love to fetch a pale of love" If so forgive me and blame love.

Trust me I have good reasons but I must stay hush.

I must agree with you. It's newly written and needs some polishing. By the way, spot on with the Marlowe reference. I had sent her that very poem just before writing this one. I'm quite impressed Niphredil.

Looks like your little poem prematurely ejaculated.

Good point. 7 aces out of 14 lines ain't too bad (assuming you like the first line as much as the title). It seems my solid images disintegrated with the universe. But you're right about it and I know it.

I could shorten it but then it wouldn't be a sonnet.
Maybe a haiku?
World crashes into sun
The universe soon follows
still with you I live

Jesus just called. He told me to tell you you're a butthole.

I am coveting your poem. I'm watching, waiting and someday I may take the opportunity to comment and vote on it.

Good eye me lady! I must have been sleepless the day I posted this. The worst part is I wrote "seem" correctly the very next line up. Thank you for the welcoming. Well I must get some sleep then, Tata.
-always- A_Dark_Calm

I was wondering about whether I needed a comma there. Thankya.
The computer reference is sort of a give away.