on some deleted poem
14 Oct 2006, 11:10 PM
it's about the uprising in Prague, in 1999.
on Soy Flat White with One by helenwales
11 Oct 2006, 10:17 PM
what's with the despair?
on some deleted poem
11 Oct 2006, 9:41 PM
its a dead poets society rip off - first half setting it up to say something - but really it is doing what it is criticising. I don't know - Sam Mendes attributes meaning to his films, after the fact. Argues that he subconsciously framed Road to Perdition with ideas which happened to coincide with complimentary reviews from overly analytical critics.
Don't you love attributing meaning after the fact? style then substance yeah...
Don't you love attributing meaning after the fact? style then substance yeah...
on He Cares So Little About His Self by Hostileintent
11 Oct 2006, 9:56 PM
slightly melodramatic - bits and pieces really 'work' though.
Don't listen to helenwales, she writes for post 2000 Vanilla Ice.
Don't listen to helenwales, she writes for post 2000 Vanilla Ice.
on some deleted poem
12 Oct 2006, 11:24 AM
yeah - i enjoy frying them up with some cheese.
on some deleted poem
11 Oct 2006, 6:01 AM
also, don't you think that your comment is a little ironic, considering the subject matter?
Was it a bodily response to the rhythm? or a pattern thing due to poems written before?
Just tryin to understand. I guess you have to know the rules to be able to adequately break em huh?
teach me, netpoets, teach me...
Was it a bodily response to the rhythm? or a pattern thing due to poems written before?
Just tryin to understand. I guess you have to know the rules to be able to adequately break em huh?
teach me, netpoets, teach me...
on Veins by helenwales
11 Oct 2006, 4:29 AM
it has the cheek of early Yeats, the wind resistance of byron, and eminems special sauce.
I give it four out of four air pies.
I give it four out of four air pies.
on some deleted poem
11 Oct 2006, 4:31 AM
A line from the simpsons?
Damn, i really thought I had struck white gold with this one.
Damn, i really thought I had struck white gold with this one.