poemranker ::20 most recent comments by amateurR and replies

Comments byamateurR, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Seasonal Lover by amateurR 19 Sep 2002, 2:14 PM
what i was trying to say is nature changes her seasons every 3-4 months and is unfaithful in that sense that she doesn't stick to one, but what you're saying makes perfect sense. I will look into revising it, thanx for the constructive advice. Please look at my other poems and tell me what you think, I'd appreciate it.
Thank you once again.
on Question by unknown 17 Sep 2002, 10:01 PM
good poem. very interesting.
on I Miss You by savannah 17 Sep 2002, 9:11 PM
'far or soon'? that doesn't seem right
replying on My Mamma's Hands by amateurR 13 Sep 2002, 11:45 PM
thanx for the comments and constructive advice..i appreciate it and i see what ur saying on reading it again...
yes..it is right..death was the picture i was trying to paint..my mom passed away 4 years ago. thanx once again.
on Mother! by kawakurdi 13 Sep 2002, 12:46 PM
very beautiful indeed!
replying on Life : Paradox by amateurR 13 Sep 2002, 12:45 PM
thank you!