on Delicate hearts grow thick skins. by Nepanthe
19 Feb 2008, 5:39 PM
It feels like a congregational in the church of hippie love, yes!
on yet another what if poem by shadows
27 May 2005, 10:56 AM
I'm still laughing about the name lintyweenis!
ok ok sorry. Happiness is a warm something.
thats it.
ok ok sorry. Happiness is a warm something.
thats it.
on yet another what if poem by shadows
27 May 2005, 10:57 AM
5
five
thats it
five
thats it
on some deleted poem
4 Aug 2005, 9:04 AM
You joyfully got my attention with your obvious dislike of my poetry. Tell me, was it completely necessary to give all my poems zeros? It seems to me you might have been impressed. Nice try on this poem rockmage but I think you need to get laid buddy.
on His homage to the sea by Beyond_Dreams
6 Sep 2005, 10:55 AM
This reads like some childs diary entry, and it bores the life out of me. I need a nap.
on His homage to the sea by Beyond_Dreams
6 Sep 2005, 10:55 AM
also I'm an asshole.
on some deleted poem
8 Sep 2005, 12:24 PM
For claiming to be an artist.
What? Sculpture? I might switch to fecal matter you know, sort of an Transylvanian-provera feel, it would suit your faux-poe masturbation quite nicely.
What? Sculpture? I might switch to fecal matter you know, sort of an Transylvanian-provera feel, it would suit your faux-poe masturbation quite nicely.
on Internet Junkie by cuddlytiger17
8 Sep 2005, 12:33 PM
The last four lines ring of something beyond the screen, I like that, links, ties, bonds, slavery!
Not in a kinked out way, but deeper.
Cudos lady.
Not in a kinked out way, but deeper.
Cudos lady.
on A Portrait of Antonio Machado (Edit) by Sasha
8 Sep 2005, 12:46 PM
I enjoyed this gesture of the traditional. You made me want to bust out my rosary.
on some deleted poem
8 Sep 2005, 10:57 AM
It's like mis informed D
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on Beneath The Undertow by longships
8 Sep 2005, 11:00 AM
Whats with the boats, and water stuff? Television is taking over your minds. Mankinds number one poison, TV.
I'm affected, goddamn I'm affected.
I'm affected, goddamn I'm affected.
on Insanity by Lifeboatman
16 Sep 2005, 10:43 PM
Yu hit it on the head
on The Death of Many Octopi by tianyi
16 Sep 2005, 10:45 PM
Viceral.
Not more much to say. ARt. subje-C---tiv--v.
Not more much to say. ARt. subje-C---tiv--v.
on some deleted poem
20 Aug 2006, 4:05 PM
ludicrousness sounds like ridiculousness and serendipitousness/ hella awkward.
hella- other wise engaging
hella- other wise engaging
on The Pole and the Shadow by Dovina
20 Aug 2006, 4:07 PM
This feels like lightning in a bottle/ pure soliloquy.
vibrant beautiful thank you
vibrant beautiful thank you
on Jeeves Garcia by Crakyamuni
21 Aug 2006, 8:55 AM
cmon man votes?
on some deleted poem
31 Mar 2007, 6:38 AM
They made a movie about this right? If Ice T listened to Cher all day long and spent most of his time in dank Parisian bathroom stalls in Lieu of his Royalty checks, he wouldn't be Ice T...he'd be M. This poem is bad because you don't care about it, it shows. Could be your impetus though, mysterious. High five.
on some deleted poem
29 Mar 2007, 2:48 PM
Seems you've taken aninterest since my departure. Look you son a of a bitch, I don't know who you think you are but I think your scum. Most likely an overdated pain in arts asshole, a hemmeroid.