replying on this is what I see by malpaso
21 Nov 2007, 6:03 AM
eloquent!!!!
on What bianca saw!!! by titan69
19 Nov 2007, 6:33 AM
the most ignorant, piss-poor limerick I ever heard
but funny, though and proves
that with a little embedded irony
and slant rhyme you
can have a good time and actually...polish a turd!
but funny, though and proves
that with a little embedded irony
and slant rhyme you
can have a good time and actually...polish a turd!
on ode to boa:w/thanks to the 60's rock group, BloodRock by malpaso
16 Nov 2007, 4:10 AM
no but I wish there had been
on Shuushin the multi-personality total cunt by mr cunt
9 Nov 2007, 7:38 AM
will the real cunt please stand up....heh, cunts don't have legs, hee hee!!! you can't hide cory feldman in here. he stands out like a sore cunt!!!
on The Ultimate~Creep goes to Mecca! by Bachus
8 Nov 2007, 5:06 PM
that is one kick ass poem, bachus. like being side swiped by a mack truck and punched in the gut.
on I am an genius, and you're a stupid turd by Shardik
8 Nov 2007, 5:02 PM
god damn, Shardik!!!
on Remembering Joy by ifni
10 Jun 2007, 6:14 PM
great commentary on beating writers block and profoundly wistful and brief---just the way i like 'em. keep on writing!!!!!
replying on Persnickety by malpaso
10 Jun 2007, 6:11 PM
your criticism is valid but if I could do narrative I'd be writing short stories and novels....seriously, narrative poetry is one of the best genres around but I just get too hung up in the middle of those i tried to write so i just figure i'd try and stamp concept or cluster of concepts and keep it short and sweet....i'm glad you had fun with it, that's what counts!!
replying on Persnickety by malpaso
10 Jun 2007, 6:07 PM
what you say is true and I appreciate the criticism as valid. only thing is I write poetry as if mining for hidden concepts rather than mining for images (which is a good motive, too) and also, my attention span is about 2 minutes