poemranker ::20 most recent comments by malpaso

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on Poetic Blue Justice by Dovina 13 Nov 2008, 8:14 AM
Excellent
on meta ku? what da fuck is dat? by malpaso 7 Nov 2008, 6:08 AM
this poem sucks, is great, or mediocre at best? gimme some feedback, you who are usually so vocal!
on wam bam by malpaso 2 May 2008, 7:44 AM
thanks......I think
on sperladnik by malpaso 10 Jun 2008, 7:30 PM
no one dares comment on the dreaded sperladnik...like the Inquisition, no one expects it.....mmmmbwaaahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!
on Daddy works at the Bank by Skamper 10 Jun 2008, 7:38 PM
man, that's gross....I love it!!!!!
on some deleted poem 5 Jun 2008, 7:24 AM
I love the rhythm of this poem;it creates suspense. I would,however,use a different verb than 'fling'. Give more power to the co-subject of the poem with something like 'spring'. Other than that small nuance, the imagery is superbly emotive---I give you a 10!Keep writing!
on wam bam by malpaso 3 May 2008, 6:27 AM
it was an accident...sorry
on Delicate hearts grow thick skins. by Nepanthe 18 Feb 2008, 6:40 PM
absolutely beautiful! may fallen snow encase me.
on some deleted poem 4 Mar 2008, 4:56 AM
excellent picture of the inside-outside dichotomy of the public's obsession with beauty, fame, and personality---lohan is a public creation: image over substance every time. good work!!
on some deleted poem 26 Dec 2007, 3:56 PM
what a superb portrait of a child growing like a tough beautiful flower from the dung of his father's shadow---I loved it!!
on Milk and gas by Caducus 27 Dec 2007, 5:18 PM
outstanding!!!
on A-looky here. by malpaso 27 Nov 2007, 3:27 PM
pov stands for point of view, skamper.
on A Cyclamatic Word of Advice by Skamper 22 Nov 2007, 1:22 PM
I would hate to be the one on the other end of THAT laser. Hey is this website in the UK?
on some deleted poem 24 Dec 2008, 5:29 PM
that's the Holocaust for ya. This poem is excellent!!!
on The Politics of Poetry.coms by <{Baba^Yaga}> 8 Jan 2009, 4:23 PM
at least you're not bitter!
on Taste Ghazni by eliastemplar 16 Jan 2009, 5:20 PM
loved the part about the berkas and the puddles....enhances the whole theme of timelessness and that kind of subtle power
on The Project by malpaso 24 Feb 2009, 9:27 AM
'always'? you mean like everytime you read it? how sweet!!!!
on The death of Carlos Huarrez by Caducus 25 Feb 2009, 9:35 AM
Ah,First World meets Third World....by chance? Excellent work!!
so it sounds like loss of virginity is a disease and a degradation to some uninformed people like this girl who took the extreme way out....funny as hell, O Bear God!!
gotta say: this poem kicks ass.