on Whispers among me by celticskatermatt1
27 Sep 2008, 9:26 PM
Celtic.. I really enjoyed your poem as it's resonance chimed a similar chord within me. "The Fire" kindling your toes... just a breath of life, heat, flame, desire...enough to keep you from jumping over the edge.
on Bottled Wisdom by Bethy
27 Sep 2008, 9:23 PM
This poem resonated for me.. I particularly enjoyed the tempo that you have conveyed with your spacing of the text as it conveys the highs and lows of life just as much as the words you have chosen do!