on Cat by Topaz Servias
7 Jan 2003, 6:05 PM
go over this with a fine tooth comb. Quite funny. no vote till tweaked.
on Backwards baby blend by Blade
7 Jan 2003, 5:52 PM
Contrasting hard/soft and cold/warm. Interesting mix indeed.
replying on 6.387 seconds by INTRANSIT
7 Jan 2003, 3:27 PM
Not what I was going for but thanks for the observation! Always useful to hear what others (see).
on Home by Owner of the Sky
7 Jan 2003, 2:54 PM
I concur. This is good raw. Bake it better.
on Into the Deep by Owner of the Sky
7 Jan 2003, 2:51 PM
apologiZe. change salt to gravel, I think. vellynize. aint seen you in a coons age. howaya,K?
replying on Midnight in the Garden by Cha no Onna
7 Jan 2003, 2:42 PM
Duh! My bad. PK is right, I'm not very observant. pleh.
wunnerful name though, on both accounts.
wunnerful name though, on both accounts.
replying on 6.387 seconds by INTRANSIT
7 Jan 2003, 2:40 PM
Yes, but that would be a little slow. by,oh,say,200.
on Frustration by DewDrop
7 Jan 2003, 9:41 AM
dona matter what eet ees. eees goot.
on Midnight in the Garden by Cha no Onna
7 Jan 2003, 9:39 AM
I cant find the changes.Still like it.
on To the memory of Leonie Rysanek by vulcan
7 Jan 2003, 7:08 AM
Yes, well done.
on Shark by cleverdevice
7 Jan 2003, 6:37 AM
I'll see your shark and raise you
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on Sticks and Stones Farm, Pot Luck Thursday Nights by <~>
6 Jan 2003, 3:41 PM
Um, did I piss you off?
This is better,though.
This is better,though.
on My sad life by Bobjim the II
6 Jan 2003, 3:36 PM
Definitely funny!!
on A Man's Best Friend. by DewDrop
6 Jan 2003, 8:50 AM
Interestin twist.
on Jewel by cleverdevice
6 Jan 2003, 8:45 AM
How did it impact the floor? harshly? L-13, merge it with L-14.
It's great when something so small can have an impact so big.
It's great when something so small can have an impact so big.
on Sticks and Stones Farm, Pot Luck Thursday Nights by <~>
6 Jan 2003, 8:38 AM
I see you've already tweaked the first stanza. still looming twice.
I'm holding the vote.
I'm holding the vote.
on Sticks and Stones Farm, Pot Luck Thursday Nights by <~>
6 Jan 2003, 6:44 AM
let me slurk some coffee and we'll get down to business. Definitely smoother.
on NEEDING TO REFORM by suzanna
5 Jan 2003, 7:50 AM
Best of dthe three.
on Someone please say no. by suzanna
5 Jan 2003, 7:48 AM
What is normal? Great Idea, too plain. add color.
on A Stressful Moment by suzanna
5 Jan 2003, 7:46 AM
No you will have only begun.