Comments byINTRANSIT, 1521–1540 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Nightshades by Bachus 18 Jan 2003, 7:31 AM
The best I've read this a.m.
on Unmasking Wyverns by horus8 17 Jan 2003, 6:43 AM
Like the others, I am new to the definition of villanelle. The content is excellent. not sure it's
a perfect villanelle. Contact someone smarter than I. 8
on Just clubbing fur seals by <{Baba^Yaga}> 17 Jan 2003, 6:17 AM
Whether or not this is about some one matters not, to me. I wish I could comment on this with some form of intelligence. Being that iI can't, I like it.
on Baked Peach Cobbler Windowed by horus8 15 Jan 2003, 5:57 PM
Good for you Mr H. Nice and slow, take your time.
on 'Fucky Fucky 5 Dollar' by scitz 15 Jan 2003, 9:26 AM
scary. sad. meritable.
replying on Anchored pockets by INTRANSIT 15 Jan 2003, 7:00 AM
Thank you. I've realised that fewer poems with more effort is a worthwhile endeavor. This piece however seems to have flopped.
win some lose some. Could I get some thoughts on "eskimo", please.
on Skin on My Soup by jessicazee 14 Jan 2003, 6:37 PM
TOO fun. WAAAAAAAY too fun.
on The Poem of an Eighth-Grader by jessicazee 14 Jan 2003, 6:35 PM
Middle school genius.
on Seasoning a new tank by Cha no Onna 14 Jan 2003, 11:49 AM
Why this has not recieved more attention is beyond me. The secondary theme is there, I haven't found it yet. This is amazing.
on Damn Americans by T'ien 8 Jan 2003, 7:01 AM
no. but I can spell c-z-e-c-h-o-s
uh, Damn! where's my dictionary?!!!
on dollar collar by rosiebailey 8 Jan 2003, 6:47 AM
S&M not what its cracked up to be,eh?
replying on insomnia by Bill Z Bub 8 Jan 2003, 6:45 AM
You're a fine hand though, keep up the good work!
replying on insomnia by Bill Z Bub 8 Jan 2003, 6:44 AM
Copy you I did, driver.
replying on Tingling by INTRANSIT 8 Jan 2003, 6:42 AM
Thanks big C. I still need a sound. Ideas? I'll probably merge some of the first lines to smooth it a little more.
Hittin the road today, catch ya if I can.
replying on Tingling by INTRANSIT 8 Jan 2003, 6:39 AM
I have no clue who you are. doesn't matter. Thank you. That is one hell of a compliment.
replying on electronically by Quarton 7 Jan 2003, 7:44 PM
JuSt asking. geez. i can't even spell any more.
replying on electronically by Quarton 7 Jan 2003, 7:43 PM
Jut asking. Thank you.
on insomnia by Bill Z Bub 7 Jan 2003, 7:42 PM
I like it as is. But what do I know
I drive a truck.
replying on electronically by Quarton 7 Jan 2003, 7:38 PM
-=Dark_Angel=-, are you saying these things to counterbalance my comments?
on electronically by Quarton 7 Jan 2003, 6:10 PM
ITS TWOO! ITS TWOO! Nice job Mr.ton Say, when is Jupiter supposed to pass near the U.S.?