Comments byINTRANSIT, 1501–1520 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on The last day of an old year by poetandknowit 23 Jan 2003, 4:24 PM
Subtle and smoothe tweaks. have a bow. I'm mobile again, want I should visit? Love the contrast of the static radio and the clear wndchimes. you are the great educator. 2nd of course to Z.
replying on Minoan lover by Jeremi B. Handrinos 22 Jan 2003, 7:33 AM
i'm busted! really though, any minute now.
on An Anthem for Peace by dougsoderstrom 22 Jan 2003, 7:32 AM
Check : vulgar peoples.

Oh, and pray hard.
on Minoan lover by Jeremi B. Handrinos 22 Jan 2003, 7:22 AM
My name is Maximus Desimus Meridius
Commander of the armies of the north
General of the felix legions
Loyal servant to the true emporer
Marcus Aurelius.
Father to a murdered son,
husband to a murdered wife,
and I will have my vengeance,
in this life or the next.
on Ode to spoons by Dostoyevsky 22 Jan 2003, 7:04 AM
small stainlees scoop of happiness.
on 2 weeks and a day by Bill Z Bub 21 Jan 2003, 4:31 PM
don't be afraid of pattern on this, it works.
replying on Vulgar peoples by INTRANSIT 20 Jan 2003, 6:04 PM
likey? or no?
replying on Vulgar peoples by INTRANSIT 20 Jan 2003, 6:02 PM
neckties. I hate it when a but gets in the way.
replying on The Militarization of America by Quarton 20 Jan 2003, 5:58 PM
paper airplane it first.. "guns for butter" shows us you can work it. Take as much time as you need. Think "fun" not "work".
on love song by <~> 20 Jan 2003, 4:18 PM
Wow. Claymation and string art. Hard to go wrong with the two of you. magnificent.
on The Militarization of America by Quarton 20 Jan 2003, 3:58 PM
Sorry Q-man. We're with you at heart on this, just not the poetic angle. work it, baby, Own it.
on Mooseknuckle MacFoofingtons by Bachus 20 Jan 2003, 6:39 AM
The underlying story is killer. My favorite kind of truth.
on Trials of life haikus by <{Baba^Yaga}> 20 Jan 2003, 6:35 AM
GO rillas? I'd like to watch the olympics, but what happens when the gorillas turn the tables?
on Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 20 Jan 2003, 6:23 AM
And tortles too.
on what little I know by nentwined 19 Jan 2003, 5:51 AM
Bendy. Cool. kenned? ok. kenned.
on A black sanded tropical vision by horus8 18 Jan 2003, 7:25 PM
I get a little lost with (specialized orangery). 6-2 add comma before (so) also?
replying on 2 from 6 by INTRANSIT 18 Jan 2003, 2:34 PM
turtles, tortles, lets call the whole thing off.
replying on 2 from 6 by INTRANSIT 18 Jan 2003, 2:34 PM
2 separate poems, written when I was 6yrs old. Tortles are not dumb. When they pick up off the floor, they're quite quick. Nor are Iguanae or goldfish for that matter.
on The man who sold his wife by Bachus 18 Jan 2003, 7:40 AM
I'm sure he's not the only one.
on blues by <~> 18 Jan 2003, 7:33 AM
...and it's Exxon valdeez all over again.